My six!

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Hi Pete, I hear you’ve joined the amdrammers!

I have Paul, I’m participating in their next production and playing Pedro, a part previously performed by Brad Pitt.

A leading role Pete, are you up to it?

I’m practising Paul, it requires precision and preciseness as the part employs a peculiar parlance punctuated with pronunciation potholes.

What’s with the palliteration Pete?

Well, Paul, apparently it’s an excellent way for a thespian to exercise their jaw, their lips and their tongue, I’m going to skip the Q’s and have a crack at my R’s next – ooh, that sounds rude!

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Thanks to Denise at GirlieOnTheEdge for hosting.

42 thoughts on “My six!

  1. beth's avatar beth November 10, 2022 / 10:41

    precisely! perfect.

  2. Doug Jacquier's avatar Doug Jacquier November 10, 2022 / 11:51

    Pshaw, Keith. I’m sure you can roll your R’s with the best of them. 😉

  3. ladysighs's avatar ladysighs November 10, 2022 / 12:40

    This story is so funny I decided to read it aloud to my husband. When he said, “What’s the point?” I knew I would never get the part in the play. It doesn’t sound quite the same with a Texas drawl.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 10, 2022 / 16:26

      Thanks so much. At least you tried, I’m trying to imagine what it would sound like!

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 10, 2022 / 12:45

    Hahaha! Good story Keith

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje November 10, 2022 / 16:32

        You’re welcome my friend

  5. ceayr's avatar ceayr November 10, 2022 / 14:15

    Pretty pulsating piece, pal!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 10, 2022 / 16:46

      Praise be for the peace provided by my parasympathetic nerve!

  6. Bernadette Braganza's avatar Bernadette Braganza November 10, 2022 / 14:36

    I wonder how the conversation will sound by the time he get to X.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 10, 2022 / 16:56

      I’ve run out of P’s now so I’ll just say – thank you!

  7. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny November 10, 2022 / 16:51

    Good point: Too many alliterations on the same letter leads to “pronunciation potholes”.

  8. UP's avatar UP November 10, 2022 / 16:56

    well written, decently done, engagingly exciting, and a super six

  9. Spira's avatar Spira November 10, 2022 / 17:13

    🤣…the ending!
    Brilliant, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 10, 2022 / 17:23

      I’m pleased! I wasn’t sure it would work as one person’s R’s is anothers’ Ass depending on where in the world you live!

  10. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin November 10, 2022 / 17:46

    Lol 😆…a thespian exercise.. Oh goodness Keith, you make me laugh 😅

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 11, 2022 / 10:37

      I suppose you could call them thexercises! Thanks for chuckling along Suzette.

  11. clark's avatar clark November 10, 2022 / 21:59

    damn! them others, they perused all the ‘Ps’ and left no pea stone unturned, pushed as I am into paroxysmal peripatetic pursuits, I accept the pluperfect price of vocabulary paralysis…

    good thing you Six was focused on vocabulary and not, say, gymnastics or the local emergency room would have a line out the door
    lol

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 11, 2022 / 11:10

      When it comes to P-ing, practice makes perfect and perfect needs practice, I’m perfectly practised and practically perfect, but won’t pontificate on your participation in the P pot challenge for fear of appearing presumptuous! Ouch, I’ve just twisted my tongue, emergency room, here I come!

  12. jenne49's avatar jenne49 November 10, 2022 / 22:16

    Clark’s right – there’s not a pea left unturned. Oh wait – has anyone used precocious? Definitely that, then. Precocious talent.
    (I am reminded of more innocent days when I sent an invitation to an event to the name of the head teacher written on the list on the wall in the office, completely unaware that an irate parent had provided the name: Mr R. Sole. He didn’t come along…)

  13. Patricia's avatar Patricia November 10, 2022 / 22:31

    You do have a way with words.

  14. Tom's avatar Tom November 11, 2022 / 10:41

    Fun six, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 11, 2022 / 11:39

      I’m pleased! Not the easiest story to read aloud, it took me several goes to make the audio!

      • The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller November 11, 2022 / 12:02

        I’m sure! Nothing like a good old tongue twister … or tongue twerker!

  15. GirlieOnTheEdge's avatar GirlieOnTheEdge November 11, 2022 / 19:14

    🤣😂 What fun this week at the Ramblings Playhouse! I’ve enjoyed the comment thread as much as your Six, Keith –
    a perfectly pleasant experience 😉

  16. dorahak's avatar dorahak November 12, 2022 / 01:28

    Pleased as punch to have perused this piece, Pkeith!

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