A poem

for Six Sentence Stories where the given word is Juice.

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Years ago on the slopes of Bordeaux,

grapes_and_glass_imagea harvest in the sun.

Plump purple grapes were flung into crates,

and the ritual had begun.

 

Trodden and squeezed the juice was released,

a taste of things to come.

Five years to soak in barrels of oak,

the vintner’s task was done.

 

Finally bottled and labelled and corked,

boxed and sent away.

Then opened and poured, savoured, adored,

on this, its finest day!

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Thanks to Denise at GirlieOnTheEdge for hosting.

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28 thoughts on “A poem

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 13, 2022 / 10:51

    Your poem says it so poetically

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 14, 2022 / 17:37

      Poetry is not my kind of thing, so I’m really pleased Sadje!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 14, 2022 / 17:43

        👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

  2. UP's avatar UP January 13, 2022 / 13:55

    tres jealous of your poetic ability. good six, painted a scene in rythmic rhyme.

  3. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough January 13, 2022 / 14:13

    Nice to see you using your poetic license again. 🙂
    If five years is enough, why is it in books toffs like Lord Peter are always asking for some Chateau XX 100-yr-old vintage?

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 14, 2022 / 17:40

      Lord Peter lets it keep on maturing in the bottle, though I’m not sure what century-old wine would taste like!

  4. ceayr's avatar ceayr January 13, 2022 / 16:30

    How to make wine in 6 easy steps!
    Santé, mon vieux.

  5. Liz H's avatar Liz H January 13, 2022 / 18:01

    What a wonderful, joyous poem!
    Skol to you, Keith!

  6. Frank Hubeny's avatar Frank Hubeny January 13, 2022 / 20:55

    Nice transitioning phrase “a taste of things to come” from grape harvest to bottled wine.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 14, 2022 / 18:05

      Thanks, Natasha, and how nice to see your lovely smile again!

  7. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall January 14, 2022 / 09:03

    Bravo, mon ami! 🍷

  8. jenne49's avatar jenne49 January 14, 2022 / 13:16

    I would comment, but I’m too bust looking for the corkscrew! 😉
    Excellent poem, Keith, that conjures up the atmosphere of the sun and the pleasure.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 14, 2022 / 18:07

      Far more important you find your corkscrew! Thanks so much, Jenne.

  9. GirlieOnTheEdge's avatar GirlieOnTheEdge January 15, 2022 / 03:48

    Beautiful, Keith. Your reading was perfect!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 16, 2022 / 16:58

      That’s very kind of you Denise, thanks so much.

  10. Prior...'s avatar Prior... January 15, 2022 / 06:33

    Keith, I enjoy your writing so much and remember that each ten I visit your blog

    And in this masterful work I could feel the vineyards- the barrels and then was ready to swirl my own glass of wine to check the legs….
    Mmmmm

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 16, 2022 / 17:00

      I couldn’t wish for a nicer comment Prior, thanks, and thanks again – à votre santé!

      • Prior...'s avatar Prior... January 17, 2022 / 04:34

        🙂

  11. The Atomic Mage's avatar The Atomic Mage January 15, 2022 / 19:33

    Superb poem about a fine wine (and its process) and finally its enjoyment. Bravo et santé!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 16, 2022 / 17:17

      Thanks so much for savouring my little poem! Cheers!

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