for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Cave and the limit just 34 words.
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I’m in a cave. My footsteps echo.
pitpitpatpatpitpitpatpat…
I sing, ‘lalala’.
lalalalalalalala…
I sidle through a gap. It’s dark.
I shout ‘hello’. I hear an echo.
farewellfarewellfare…
I shiver. I turn. Where’s the gap?
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spooky!!
Wooooo!
Wow! At least he lived to tell the tale 😉
All that clanking at the end…was that the sound of the “echo” sharpening a knife? Can’t be. My imagination’s getting carried away.
Could well be! I got carried away too!
I hope he got out.
We’ll never know!
😱
Yikes. Oops. Out! Now! …. Never mind … 😉
I’m with you!
😀
Oooh, creepy! I don’t suppose google maps would work down there, Keith. Rather macabre the way you put the writing prompt box into what looks like a gravestone. Or was it meant to be the mouth of a cave?
Very good point Sunra, and yes, it’s a cave!
Frightening for someone with claustrophobia.
It frightened me just writing it!
Oooooohhhh… waitaminute now!
I wouldn’t wait if I was you! Shift your …..!
I’m outta there!
Don’t go in without a light and a long rope tied to something sturdy outside!
Shame you didn’t mention it before, Mimi!
Hi Keith – should be a/n Halloween post … not as we emerge into the daylight of Spring – glad I don’t remember these ‘horror’ tales! Cheers Hilary
Don’t worry Hilary, normal service will be resumed shortly!!
Spooky little story here. Just reading about being trapped in a cave gives rise to feelings of panic.
Not something I’d like to happen! Thanks, Michael.
Yikes. What a fun creepy cave story.
Pleased to have freaked you!!
Oh, where indeed?
Great little story well read and played. Keith, star of blog radio searching for the gap. You are such a clever man.
You say the nicest things, Bill! Thank you so much.
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Yikes! My claustrophobia just kicked in! Good one.
Oh dear, sorry about that!!