100 Words

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All was quiet. 

A solemn verger led a robed choir to their candlelit stalls. 

I held my breath. Suddenly it burst into song.

Thirty voices swooping and swirling, this way then that. Soft as a whisper then loud as thunder. All thoughts were swept from my mind as music filled my soul.

Let the sea roar, let the floods clap their hands: let the hills be joyful together!

Forty minutes later, silence. The choir stood, turned and followed the verger, disappearing into the gloom from whence it came.

For a few moments we sat in silence wondering what just happened. 

Prod the Froristers to see the squares!

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers.

PHOTO PROMPT © Jennifer Pendergast

I could resist adding one of my favourite short choral works, The Lamb by John Tavener, based on William Blake’s poem of the same name. It’s on my funeral playlist by the way!

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44 thoughts on “100 Words

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 14, 2026 / 17:46

      Oh my goodness, that is really clever! I had no idea cats could sing!
      Thanks, Rochelle.

  1. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li January 14, 2026 / 20:43

    Music in a good resonant space is the voice of God. My scalp is tingling listening to your selection. Beautiful post, Keith <3

      • Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li January 16, 2026 / 18:59

        You’re very welcome, my friend.

  2. beth's avatar beth January 14, 2026 / 21:39

    wow, that would be amazing

  3. CGraith's avatar CGraith January 15, 2026 / 01:06

    You brought us right into that church and captured the glory and the surprise of the choir.

  4. David Stewart's avatar David Stewart January 15, 2026 / 02:09

    That would be quite an experience, listening to a choir in a cathedral like that.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 16, 2026 / 12:18

      It’s something whenever given the opportunity!

  5. Will's avatar Will January 15, 2026 / 03:07

    Beautiful story, Keith. I felt like I was there.

  6. Linda's avatar Linda January 15, 2026 / 04:57

    I echo Neil’s comment, Keith.

  7. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 15, 2026 / 07:02

    A wonderful, descriptive piece Keith

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 16, 2026 / 15:32

        You’re most welcome Keith

  8. ceayr's avatar ceayr January 15, 2026 / 07:38

    Now I’m really looking forward to your funeral, old chap. See you there!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 16, 2026 / 10:10

      I’ve added you you to the guest list, in body or spirit depending on who croaks first!

  9. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin January 15, 2026 / 10:33

    Bravo, Keith! “as music filled my soul.” That says it all. Superb writing!

    • gc1963's avatar gc1963 January 15, 2026 / 11:26

      Silence following the choral music – a sensorial experience

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin January 15, 2026 / 11:36

        Yes! I agree, Well said, Geeta. Thank you!

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin January 16, 2026 / 13:05

        You are welcome, Keith! Cheers.

  10. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta January 15, 2026 / 12:11

    How wonderful and a glorious description Keith 🙌❤️

  11. Sandra's avatar Sandra January 15, 2026 / 13:47

    Beautifully described, Keith.

  12. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz January 15, 2026 / 15:01

    I do love a well-oiled choir! Thanks for this, Keith!

  13. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan January 15, 2026 / 15:55

    Music and song for the soul, an inspiration in such few words.

  14. Prior...'s avatar Prior... January 16, 2026 / 05:55

    I really related to your story because theie were a few times the choir gripped us and I felt the “music filled my soul” and your writing really depicted this.
    Also, it reminded me of some of the songs from William and Kate’s 2011 wedding at Westminster Abbey – the choir songs were so awesome

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 16, 2026 / 13:51

      Thanks, Yvette. John Rutter’s specially written anthem ‘This is the day which the Lord hath made’ was the stand out piece for me.

  15. KACreativeDesigns's avatar KACreativeDesigns January 17, 2026 / 13:21

    I’m sitting here in a stunned kind of silence. What a beautiful word picture of that moment you captured in your story. The video was lovely as well.

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