101 words!

I promise to only use 99 next week!

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I know we don’t celebrate Christmas, but most of our customers do which is why I said we should take advantage of it. I’ve added turkey sandwiches, mince pies, mulled wine and a few other festive nibbles to the menu. I’ve ordered some bits and pieces that would make nice presents, bracelets necklaces and things, and cleared a place for them over there. 

All I asked you to do was put up a few decorations. I didn’t expect you take it that literally though, I mean, six little stars dangling from the ceiling?

You could at least have hung up ten!

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Click Froggie to visit the squares!

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers

PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

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41 thoughts on “101 words!

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff December 3, 2025 / 12:55

    Dear Keith,

    I didn’t even notice the stars and I took the picture. 😀 Cute story. One word over…tut tut. Seriously not much of an infraction and cute story besides.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  2. beth's avatar beth December 3, 2025 / 13:33

    Hilarious!!

  3. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz December 3, 2025 / 14:20

    Very perceptive! I missed the stars entirely!

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje December 3, 2025 / 15:01

    Cute story my friend.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje December 5, 2025 / 16:41

        You’re most welcome 🙏🏼

  5. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta December 3, 2025 / 16:41

    You have a very sharp eye Keith – missed the stars completely – great story 😄🙌

  6. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin December 3, 2025 / 18:01

    Awesome! I love your attention to detail in the prompt photo Keith. You had me counting the stars…!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2025 / 17:00

      As soon as I saw them I started wishing upon them, then down came a story!

  7. Prior...'s avatar Prior... December 3, 2025 / 18:24

    very fun twist with the 10 vs the 7 stars – and K, this really hit home because many a years we stopped at an Opened Walgreens on Christmas – or other store because we needed this or that – and I was glad some places were “open for business” like your smart business owenrs were in this story.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2025 / 17:13

      It’s good to know not everything’s closed! I’m pleased it stirred some memories, Yvette.

      • Prior...'s avatar Prior... December 5, 2025 / 17:39

        😉

  8. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li December 4, 2025 / 00:11

    She’s right! So funny, Keith. Mrs. Klaus vs. Scrooge.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2025 / 17:21

      Minimalism is quite trendy these days! Thanks, Mini.

  9. Will's avatar Will December 4, 2025 / 03:50

    Funny story, Keith. Some people are allergic to decorations.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2025 / 17:34

      I suppose they are, not me though, I go way over the top with mine!

  10. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan December 4, 2025 / 19:12

    Well observed. Tomorrow, there will be ten more starts.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2025 / 17:36

      Thanks, James. Soon they’ll be shooting everywhere!

  11. Dale's avatar Dale December 5, 2025 / 15:12

    They were minimalists! Nicely done!!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 5, 2025 / 17:48

      Minimalists to the minimum degree! As for coffee, cake and stuff, I can only imagine how small their portions must be!

      • Dale's avatar Dale December 5, 2025 / 17:50

        Now that is more tragic than the decorations!

  12. patrickprinsloo's avatar patrickprinsloo December 6, 2025 / 10:34


    One star for each of the six wise men? Seems appropriate.


    (Next week we’re counting words.)

  13. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts December 6, 2025 / 22:47

    A wise shopkeeper, at least one of the pair. A cute festive story, Keith. 🙂

  14. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall December 7, 2025 / 08:29

    Excellently done, Keith…. still smiling!

  15. thisobscurelife's avatar thisobscurelife December 8, 2025 / 01:20

    Funny story as usually, thanks for the laugh.

  16. plaridel's avatar plaridel December 8, 2025 / 19:04


    i suppose it isn’t too much to ask. i’m sure there are 9 other stars around waiting for their chance to shine. 🙂

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