100 words…

…for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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“It’s a wrap”, shouted the director. He flopped into his chair and smiled. At last, it was finally in the can.

Eighteen takes. Everything that could have gone wrong had gone wrong!

Actors kept tripping on the cobbles, the horse stopped twice for a ‘dump’, several people walked from their doors despite agreeing to remain inside during filming, a gust of wind blew his script away, the heroine repeatedly got her tongue in a twist…one thing after another. 

Then he noticed it. 

“Oh no, who left that bloody car there?” he yelled!

“I believe you did, boss”, said a cameraman.

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Prod a Froggie to visit the squares!

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PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook

33 thoughts on “100 words…

  1. Shweta's avatar Shweta Nov 13, 2024 / 16:22

    Uh oh. Looks like it’s going to take more than eighteen takes!

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  2. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin Nov 13, 2024 / 18:56

    Great story, Keith. Somedays things do seem to go amiss. I love the photo with the old cobble stones but looks like a pretty steep incline there!

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      • Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶's avatar Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller) Nov 15, 2024 / 13:14

        Yes! I do the same. There’s one afternoon soap opera which Bill and I started recording to watch during dinner while I recuperated from surgery. The mistake I see most often is changing hairstyles … even during the course of a single scene! Really, how difficult can that be to get right? At least the characters’ clothing remains unchanged!

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  3. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan Nov 14, 2024 / 08:45

    Frustration is his unsaid name. Why are all the actors carrying iPhones- did he see that one?

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  4. Sandra's avatar Sandra Nov 14, 2024 / 15:19

    You should have seen the lengths I went to in order to leave the scaffolding out of the pic – so much so I overlooked the car! Good take, Keith.

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  5. plaridel's avatar plaridel Nov 14, 2024 / 18:27

    i suppose one more take and then live up with the consequences. 🙂

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  6. theministryofshrawleywalks's avatar theministryofshrawleywalks Nov 14, 2024 / 23:48

    Well spotted! I didn’t notice the car initially. Never work with children or animals, locals or busy bodies, directors or producers, etc. Good stuff as per

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  7. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff Nov 15, 2024 / 12:20

    Dear Keith,

    Loved “got her tongue in a twist.” Guess he’ll have to do another take. Fun.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  8. Sadje's avatar Sadje Nov 15, 2024 / 16:02

    Oh my- now he can’t blame anyone 😜

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  9. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner Nov 16, 2024 / 12:10

    This is too funny. In the age of CGI etc. this shouldn’t be too big of a problem though. Or leave the car, it gives attentive watchers something to laugh about. People love movie bloopers.

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  10. Michael B. Fishman's avatar Michael B. Fishman Nov 18, 2024 / 03:50

    Kudos to the cameraman. I think I would have just looked bewildered and looked around to avoid saying anything. Now I’m hope the next story wipes the image of the horses out of my mind!

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