100 words…

…for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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“It’s a wrap”, shouted the director. He flopped into his chair and smiled. At last, it was finally in the can.

Eighteen takes. Everything that could have gone wrong had gone wrong!

Actors kept tripping on the cobbles, the horse stopped twice for a ‘dump’, several people walked from their doors despite agreeing to remain inside during filming, a gust of wind blew his script away, the heroine repeatedly got her tongue in a twist…one thing after another. 

Then he noticed it. 

“Oh no, who left that bloody car there?” he yelled!

“I believe you did, boss”, said a cameraman.

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Prod a Froggie to visit the squares!

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PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook

33 thoughts on “100 words…

  1. Neil MacDonald's avatar Neil MacDonald November 13, 2024 / 16:07

    Nothing Photoshop can’t deal with

  2. beth's avatar beth November 13, 2024 / 16:19

    Always something!

  3. Shweta's avatar Shweta November 13, 2024 / 16:22

    Uh oh. Looks like it’s going to take more than eighteen takes!

      • Shweta's avatar Shweta November 13, 2024 / 17:48

        😂😂 that poor cast and crew!

  4. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin November 13, 2024 / 18:56

    Great story, Keith. Somedays things do seem to go amiss. I love the photo with the old cobble stones but looks like a pretty steep incline there!

  5. Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller)'s avatar Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller) November 13, 2024 / 22:32

    Hahaha! Don’t you just love seeing the bloopers from movie clips? They can be more entertaining that the actual movie! Fun take, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 15, 2024 / 13:04

      I do! Even when watching the TV I’m constantly on the look out for misplaced objects!

      • Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller)'s avatar Nancy (The Sicilian Storyteller) November 15, 2024 / 13:14

        Yes! I do the same. There’s one afternoon soap opera which Bill and I started recording to watch during dinner while I recuperated from surgery. The mistake I see most often is changing hairstyles … even during the course of a single scene! Really, how difficult can that be to get right? At least the characters’ clothing remains unchanged!

  6. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings November 13, 2024 / 23:20

    Oh, for heaven’s sake! Edit the doggone thing out, they can do that now, and be done with it!

  7. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan November 14, 2024 / 08:45

    Frustration is his unsaid name. Why are all the actors carrying iPhones- did he see that one?

  8. Angela Adams's avatar Angela Adams November 14, 2024 / 14:55

    Hehehe! Figures… Either do a little photoshopping or another take!

  9. Sandra's avatar Sandra November 14, 2024 / 15:19

    You should have seen the lengths I went to in order to leave the scaffolding out of the pic – so much so I overlooked the car! Good take, Keith.

  10. plaridel's avatar plaridel November 14, 2024 / 18:27

    i suppose one more take and then live up with the consequences. 🙂

  11. theministryofshrawleywalks's avatar theministryofshrawleywalks November 14, 2024 / 23:48

    Well spotted! I didn’t notice the car initially. Never work with children or animals, locals or busy bodies, directors or producers, etc. Good stuff as per

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 15, 2024 / 13:44

      Not easy when you’re trying to produce a movie! Thanks so much.

  12. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff November 15, 2024 / 12:20

    Dear Keith,

    Loved “got her tongue in a twist.” Guess he’ll have to do another take. Fun.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  13. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 15, 2024 / 16:02

    Oh my- now he can’t blame anyone 😜

  14. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner November 16, 2024 / 12:10

    This is too funny. In the age of CGI etc. this shouldn’t be too big of a problem though. Or leave the car, it gives attentive watchers something to laugh about. People love movie bloopers.

  15. Michael B. Fishman's avatar Michael B. Fishman November 18, 2024 / 03:50

    Kudos to the cameraman. I think I would have just looked bewildered and looked around to avoid saying anything. Now I’m hope the next story wipes the image of the horses out of my mind!

  16. Nandini Deka's avatar Nandini Deka November 19, 2024 / 06:00

    hehe…very interesting…loved it

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