100 words

for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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I’m leaving this miserable flat. Too many bad memories.

She left me the cat for company when she walked out. At least it doesn’t constantly argue and keep telling me I’m boring.

She blamed our separtion on me. 

“It’s your fault my friends no longer want to see me, it’s your fault we have no social life”.

I’ve found myself a new job, I hated the last one. My work colleagues threw a leaving party. They held it after I left.

Time to load the van. Where’s that cat? 

“Jaspurr, Jaspurr…”

“Let meow!”

“How did you get in that box?”

 

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Prod the frog to see the squares!.

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PHOTO PROMPT © David Stewart

43 thoughts on “100 words

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje September 11, 2024 / 15:57

    Perhaps he’ll start a better life now

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje September 11, 2024 / 16:43

        👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

  2. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough September 11, 2024 / 15:59

    Nice response tot he prompt. So typical of a cat! In 1916 when DH’s grandparents moved their family from MB to SK, their belongings travelled several days in a boxcar. They unloaded, set the old wood-burning range in place and opened the oven door. Out came one of their cats!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 11, 2024 / 16:21

      Oh wow, that’s so funny! Cat’s do the strangest things!

      • Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough September 11, 2024 / 16:53

        They do indeed. There’s truth to that old saying, “Curiosity killed the cat.”

  3. Anita's avatar Anita September 11, 2024 / 17:46

    He’s taking the cat along though- her gift and some part of her!

    Smart cat- knew where to go lest it should be left behind! Time to move 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 12, 2024 / 17:02

      Absolutely, a cat for company! Thanks for dropping by, Anita.

  4. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin September 11, 2024 / 17:48

    Sounds like he is making a new start. Cats do seem to like boxes. Great story Keith, endings are never easy.

  5. MrBinks's avatar MrBinks September 11, 2024 / 19:15

    I think I see the problem…

  6. Dale's avatar Dale September 11, 2024 / 22:37

    Methinks he has delusions on just how exciting he is!!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 12, 2024 / 17:48

      My thoughts entirely! He doesn’t seem to see the signs.

      • Dale's avatar Dale September 12, 2024 / 22:30

        Some are blind… No matter how close we put them.

  7. beth's avatar beth September 11, 2024 / 23:01

    Oops!

  8. Neil MacDonald's avatar Neil MacDonald September 11, 2024 / 23:40

    I loved the leaving party held after he left

  9. Margaret's avatar Margaret September 12, 2024 / 14:18

    Jaspurr!! Cute. And he talks! Let’s hope your MC’s social life improves in his new neighbourhood. I’m smiling at the leaving party he wasn’t invited to. Lots to read between the lines there.

  10. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan September 12, 2024 / 19:32

    I was not too sympathetic towards this guy, but at least he likes cats.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 13, 2024 / 12:39

      I’m not sure the cat likes him! Cheers, James.

  11. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli September 13, 2024 / 01:25

    “My work colleagues threw a leaving party. They held it after I left.” Even the cat wants out! So funny, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 13, 2024 / 12:41

      I’m beginning to feel sorry for him – the cat, that is! Thanks, Lisa.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli September 13, 2024 / 19:07

        lol 🙂 You’re welcome.

  12. Angela Adams's avatar Angela Adams September 13, 2024 / 12:30

    “I’ve found myself a new job, I hated the last one. My work colleagues threw a leaving party. They held it after I left.” I love how much you’ve communicated with these lines! I feel for this guy, and wish him the best.

  13. plaridel's avatar plaridel September 13, 2024 / 16:14

    it looks like the cat doesn’t want to left behind. 🙂

  14. Meha Sharma's avatar Meha Sharma September 13, 2024 / 20:23

    Atleast the cat is sticking around. That’s good news. It can be a fresh start for him.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 14, 2024 / 13:59

      Indeed, but I’m not sure it wants to be transported in a box!

  15. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts September 15, 2024 / 16:22

    He seems like a sad sort, but maybe without her he’ll have a fresh start. They don’t seem compatible. I love the line, “Let Meow.” Very clever tale, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 15, 2024 / 17:39

      Thanks so much Brenda!

      He urgently needs to learn ‘how to win friends and influence people’ – maybe start by buying that very book!

  16. patrickprinsloo's avatar patrickprinsloo September 15, 2024 / 18:49

    Love the timing of the leaving party – it speaks a million words.

    (I’ve seen that cat recently, also in a box.)

  17. granonine's avatar granonine September 15, 2024 / 20:11

    Sad and funny and sad again. I loved “Let meow!”

  18. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff September 16, 2024 / 14:14

    Dear Keith,

    That says a lot about him if his coworkers threw his going away party AFTER he left. LOL. Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  19. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller September 18, 2024 / 17:32

    She doesn’t sound like a very pleasant person. I say ‘good riddance!’ You’ll be fine with Jaspurr who keeps his thoughts to himself. Funny line, though, about the party!

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