One hundred words.

For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers.

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“As if from nowhere, leaves appear; small, delicate, yet bright and cheerful. As they mature they begin to offer protection to those beneath and within. When the days grow shorter a comforting glow embraces them before they fall to the ground, their work done. Just like life, just like us”.

“It wouldn’t surprise me if you dyed your grey hair orange and had your wrinkles spray tanned to give yourself an autumnal look! Now stop prattling on, and get me a cup of tea”.

“Ah, tea leaves, proof that there’s life after death”.

“I said…”

“Yes dear, milk and sugar?”

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40 thoughts on “One hundred words.

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 8, 2024 / 15:50

    Haha! The spoiler of poetic mood

  2. granonine's avatar granonine May 8, 2024 / 18:14

    Geez, what a party pooper she is! You can speak poetry, but she speak practicalities.

  3. beth's avatar beth May 8, 2024 / 18:24

    Ha!

  4. Michael Humphris's avatar Michael Humphris May 8, 2024 / 20:55

    Tea is always better when made by another.

  5. Dale's avatar Dale May 8, 2024 / 21:06

    Some just can’t get into that fancy-type of prattling on…

    Fun stuff, Keith!

      • Dale's avatar Dale May 9, 2024 / 17:28

        I know… some just cannot be pleased!

  6. LennaBoat's avatar LennaBoat May 9, 2024 / 07:50

    Always great stories, Keith.

      • LennaBoat's avatar LennaBoat May 9, 2024 / 22:28

        You’re most welcome (Vee reinvented, if you’re wondering).😉

  7. justjoyfulness's avatar justjoyfulness May 9, 2024 / 08:42

    The master doth not like philosophy and waits to be served 🙂

  8. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough May 9, 2024 / 14:20

    “life after death…” As in, “You’re drinking something dead, dear.” Great way to ruin a cup of tea! Another good one, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 10, 2024 / 09:37

      Dead, but able to produce something desirable! Thanks, Christine

  9. plaridel's avatar plaridel May 9, 2024 / 18:09

    i love the repartee. as long as they can tolerate each other, they’ll likely grow old together. 🙂

  10. Smitha V's avatar Smitha V May 10, 2024 / 11:48

    Beautiful prattling. She’s so mean. The words were so sweet until she got in the way. 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 10, 2024 / 17:17

      Mean she is, but I’m sure he’s quite used to it and knows how to gt his own back!

  11. Angela's avatar Angela May 10, 2024 / 13:01

    “Ah, tea leaves, proof that there’s life after death”; what a wonderful line… The two contrasting voices worked well together.

  12. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli May 11, 2024 / 01:20

    A poet and a slave driver went for a walk in the woods… Appears to be a mismatch, but who knows, maybe a yin-yang complementarity. Funny story, Keith!

  13. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts May 12, 2024 / 00:26

    A pragmatist and a poet together is a challenge, but make a well-rounded couple. Haha! I really enjoyed their exchange. Nicely done, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 13, 2024 / 09:14

      I imagined them to have grins on their faces by the end!

  14. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner May 12, 2024 / 11:44

    Tea, the resurrection of dead leaves, who knew? What a fun and delightful story, I love the dialogue.

  15. Sandra's avatar Sandra May 12, 2024 / 16:24

    There’s nothing like living with a practical person not given to flights of fancy or poetic moments. I know this.

  16. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff May 12, 2024 / 20:52

    Dear Keith,

    I can just hear her eyes roll. 😉 Fun piece.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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