Smuse

A short story for The Sunday Muse weekly photo prompt which is hosted by Carrie.

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“If you stand there much longer you’ll take root”, shouted Ivy, “and anyway, what are you staring at?”

“That light,” said Phil, “up there, look at it”.

“There are just a few stars, you and your imagination!”

“But….”

“But nothing, it’s freezing out here, I’m going indoors, come in soon for goodness sake”.

 

Phil didn’t come in. He never came in. He just disappeared never to be seen again.

Ivy carried on living there alone for the rest of her days.

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The house was sold to an elderly couple, Rose and Albert. One evening, Albert was standing motionless in the garden beside a tree bedecked with ivy. 

“If you stand there much longer you’ll take root” shouted Rose “and anyway, what are you staring at?”

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Original photo: Manipulations by Sarolta Ban.

 

33 thoughts on “Smuse

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 5, 2023 / 11:02

    It’s a dangerous place!

  2. Dale's avatar Dale March 5, 2023 / 12:03

    Note to self… Do not stand in that spot!

      • Dale's avatar Dale March 5, 2023 / 15:15

        Fear not… It seems to only call the males, though…

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 5, 2023 / 15:44

        You reckon? I dare you to stand there!

  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin March 5, 2023 / 12:10

    Imaginative and spooky. Well done, Keith. I enjoyed it.

  4. wyndolynne's avatar wyndolynne March 5, 2023 / 13:13

    An eerie fairy tale that creeps under your skin. *shivers* Really like this.

  5. beth's avatar beth March 5, 2023 / 13:16

    excellent and creepy!

  6. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller March 5, 2023 / 13:35

    I call this “Metamorphosis By Starlight”. I also call it spectacular. I love this story, Keith. Bravo! 🌟

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 5, 2023 / 15:54

      You’ve summed it up perfectly, Nancy! Once again, may I thank you for your generous words.

  7. Gillena Cox's avatar Gillena Cox March 5, 2023 / 13:45

    Nice one. Luv the circular thought.

    Happy Sunday

    Much💜love

  8. Truedessa's avatar Truedessa March 5, 2023 / 23:26

    It makes me wonder what it out there captivating viewers. Spooky tale.

  9. Patricia's avatar Patricia March 6, 2023 / 05:52

    Wives often know best…husbands should listen.

  10. Natasha's avatar Natasha March 6, 2023 / 06:18

    I love how you let your imagination take over, Keith much like the Ivy creeper.
    🙂

  11. Carrie V. H.'s avatar Carrie V. H. March 6, 2023 / 11:16

    Such a captivating tale! I love where the image took you Keith! Always enjoy your stories my friend!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 6, 2023 / 13:53

      I’m so pleased you liked it Carrie, thank you so much.

  12. kenhume31's avatar kenhume31 March 6, 2023 / 17:57

    Brilliant Keith! 👌👌👏👏😁😁

  13. Helen's avatar Helen March 7, 2023 / 16:26

    Count me in the crowd who gave you applause for this one …. I love your flights of fancy.

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