Sixty-three words…

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Treetop.

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My mate drops white pebbles when rambling to help find his way back. 

Me? A compass, far more sensible. 

It says south-east. I want to go home, so I’ll head north-east, no, south-north, erm….

If I climb to that treetop I should be able to see the town. 

Oh, I can’t. 

Look, there’s a white pebble, and another. I think I’ll follow them.

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26 thoughts on “Sixty-three words…

  1. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin March 4, 2023 / 14:09

    Indeed, sometimes technology fails but nature’s guidestones lead us home. Love the story and your reading!

  2. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough March 4, 2023 / 15:15

    Delightful tale, tersely told. Thank God for clever friends, eh.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 5, 2023 / 17:13

      We could all do with one or two of them! Thanks, Christine.

  3. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda March 4, 2023 / 16:54

    When it doubt, pebble it home … 😉

  4. beth's avatar beth March 4, 2023 / 17:05

    I’m more of a pebble leaver…

  5. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander March 4, 2023 / 17:15

    Your writing is so refreshing, Keith <3 ~ very enjoyable!

    Much love,
    David

  6. Patricia's avatar Patricia March 4, 2023 / 17:54

    Good to have a friend who saves the way.

  7. Dale's avatar Dale March 4, 2023 / 19:46

    I’m thinking, if you don’t know your east from your west; your north from your south… best to follow the pebbled road!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 5, 2023 / 17:56

      There’s always a chance that you could follow it in the wrong direction, and that would never do!

      • Dale's avatar Dale March 5, 2023 / 18:08

        There is that…

  8. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 March 4, 2023 / 19:49

    Fun response Keith. Following the pebbles, you will either catch up with your friend or find yourself at his house!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 5, 2023 / 17:58

      I quite like his house so I hope it’s the latter!

      • pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 March 5, 2023 / 18:57

        Don’t forget to put the kettle on………………….

  9. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta March 4, 2023 / 19:52

    Ha yes dump your compass, follow your nose and the pebbles…. I just hope it’s your friend’s pebbles you are following! 🙂

  10. Bill's avatar Bill March 7, 2023 / 23:17

    I followed the pebbles too. Found ya both at the pub.

    I am a retired US Air Force master navigator. On the ground I am nearly useless. I have no “sense” of direction. One of my children is notoriously “directionally challenged”
    I was so surprised to discover that my phone has a compass. Does anyone know how to use them? 🙂

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