A short story …

for Friday Fictioneers

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PinClipart.com_kirsche-clipart_5815007Apple trees hang heavy with ripe fruit. Shiny cherries dangle like musical notes as bulbous pears await the fruit picker’s hand.

Mighty combine harvesters travel back and forth. Their rotating blades level fields of swaying crops leaving in their path bales of hay like so many golden chess pieces.

Vintners harvest grapes from hillsides, and the time has come to gather brewer’s hops then dry them in pointed oast houses ready for next year’s ales.

Soon, Mother Nature will enjoy a well-earned rest as the rich soil nurtures dormant seeds, and hedgerows play host to hibernating creatures of the undergrowth.

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hay-bales-sandra-cThanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Sandra Crook for the  photo.

During almost every journey I seem to be held up  by something similar this time of year!

Click the Froggies to join in the fun!

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61 thoughts on “A short story …

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje September 8, 2021 / 13:41

    Lovely story Keith

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje September 8, 2021 / 17:32

        You’re welcome

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon September 8, 2021 / 13:56

    I liked the cherries like musical notes

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 8, 2021 / 16:43

      I’m pleased you got the connection, Neil! Thanks so much.

  3. Denise's avatar Denise September 8, 2021 / 14:18

    Sounds so idyllic when you are writing about it. Not so much when I am toiling away doing fall yard clean-up. It’s never-ending at this time of year.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 8, 2021 / 16:44

      I don’t envy you, Denise, it’s bad enough on my little balcony!

  4. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner September 8, 2021 / 14:22

    Such a peaceful pastoral scene. And a newtonian frog, too. 🙂 Excellent.

  5. floweroutoflife's avatar floweroutoflife September 8, 2021 / 14:52

    A lovely pastoral reflection. A beautiful time of year.

  6. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb September 8, 2021 / 15:00

    Hi Keith – love this time of year … and am happy sitting behind a tractor full of goodies … delightful thoughts – apple and blackberry crumble! Cheers Hilary

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 8, 2021 / 16:46

      Now you’ve got my mouth watering – I’m off the greengrocer around the corner!

  7. Wild Child47's avatar Wild Child47 September 8, 2021 / 17:22

    we reap the bounties of the harvests in so many ways …. everyday …. we should be eternally grateful —- not only for filling our bellies, but also for the rich tapestry, the abundance in the assault on our senses …. because it’s all so magical, mystical …. awe-inspired …. a miracle really …. life pulsing always, even without our messy hands’ touching …..

    lovely sentiments here Keith …. hope you found some delicious treasures locally 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 8, 2021 / 17:27

      You’ve put it perfectly. We need to be constantly reminded of nature’s bounty lest we take it for granted. Got some great blackberries yesterday!

      • Wild Child47's avatar Wild Child47 September 8, 2021 / 17:44

        oh that sounds lovely ….. hope they were perfectly balanced, sweet and tart … 🙂

        indeed, a moment or silence throughout the day to give thanks ….

  8. Danny James's avatar Danny James September 8, 2021 / 18:08

    Love the rhythm and flow of your words.

  9. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti September 8, 2021 / 18:23

    Nice tribute to all the good things about early autumn

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 9, 2021 / 11:10

      It deserves a tribute, I love it! Cheers, Larry.

  10. jenne49's avatar jenne49 September 8, 2021 / 19:13

    What a beautiful piece, Keith. Such rich, autumnal language. (Sorry not to have commented recently. Busy selling my flat! Sigh!)

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 9, 2021 / 11:18

      Thanks so much, Jenne.

      I was beginning to worry about where you’d got to! Hope the sale’s going well.

  11. athling2001's avatar athling2001 September 8, 2021 / 21:22

    Well written. Made me hungry!

  12. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli September 9, 2021 / 01:08

    Lovely imagery in your poem. Truly inspired writing Keith. I think you like this time of year.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 9, 2021 / 11:27

      That’s so kind of you Lisa, and yes, I love it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 9, 2021 / 11:33

      Me neither Mimi. They are to be admired and appreciated.

  13. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan September 9, 2021 / 11:24

    I like how you capture the whole season of harvest. I bet you are ready for that beer or cider now.

  14. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff September 9, 2021 / 13:55

    Dear Keith,

    Such a peaceful and fruitful bustling of activity. Lovely. Simply lovely.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  15. Vartika's avatar Vartika September 9, 2021 / 15:18

    Beautifully written.. really want to visit this place 😊

  16. Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 9, 2021 / 16:52

    It’s inspired by the county of Kent which is known as the Garden of England. Thanks so much, Vartika.

  17. Michael's avatar Michael September 9, 2021 / 16:56

    Very topical, I enjoyed reading this,

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 9, 2021 / 16:58

      It’s that time of the year once again. Thanks so much, Michael.

  18. asarpota's avatar asarpota September 9, 2021 / 18:22

    Change of the seasons.. Very nice

  19. trishsplace's avatar trishsplace September 10, 2021 / 00:13

    Cherries dangle like musical notes, love it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 10, 2021 / 11:00

      I wondered if anyone would get it! Thanks so much, Trish.

  20. plaridel's avatar plaridel September 10, 2021 / 01:44

    a hopeful story. that’s what we all need right now.

  21. draliman's avatar draliman September 10, 2021 / 06:17

    Autumn always reminds me of junior school, with harvest festivals, conker fights and collecting leaves. So did your lovely story!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 10, 2021 / 10:56

      Conkers! What fun. I remember soaking them in vinegar to make them stronger – tut-tut! I’m sure I once had a twelver!

      When I took over my village pub the annual Conker Fight was a big event – until Health and Safety insisted goggles were worn and I dropped it.

      • draliman's avatar draliman September 11, 2021 / 05:24

        I think many schools have banned conker fights now. Though I guess once you’ve soaked them in vinegar and baked them, they are pretty dangerous 🙂

  22. Sandra's avatar Sandra September 10, 2021 / 10:40

    You expertly captured my favourite time of the year.

  23. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell September 10, 2021 / 12:54

    Ah such a wonderful time of year. I can smell the heat from the sun in the images you paint. Well done.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 10, 2021 / 16:55

      What a lovely thing to say, Laurie, thank you so much.

  24. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 September 11, 2021 / 11:14

    A lovely piece of descriptive writing, Keith.

  25. granonine's avatar granonine September 11, 2021 / 16:26

    A richly descriptive piece, Keith. You brought the season to life 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 12, 2021 / 17:18

      That;’s really kind of you Linda, thank you.

  26. Lorraine's avatar Lorraine September 12, 2021 / 01:13

    Remembories of living next to a pear orchard — except my hand never got to pick one. Commerical grower and all that; fruit whisked away slightly under ripe. Did have two apple trees in the yard: an old fashioned gravenstien over 100 years old and still producing more apples that I could bake, sauce, or give away, and the kings which was younger, and slightly less prolific.
    Remebories, too, of my aunt’s farm and helping with the harvest. Corn into the silo, hay into the barn, and meals with plates piled high with fresh late summer veggies. Helping can and preserve for the onslaught of winter.
    Fall remains my favourite time of the year, and you have captured that warm sunshine, hay-tickled noses, bounty overflowing. Something to be very thankful about.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 12, 2021 / 17:23

      Lorraine, thank you so much for leaving this delightful piece. It’s a joy to read, you really should post it on your blog. Such wonderful remembories – my new favourite word!.

      • Lorraine's avatar Lorraine September 13, 2021 / 04:11

        Glad you enjoyed it. Rural living does have it’s positives, especially in the late summer/fall when even the air seems golden.

  27. Dora's avatar Dora September 12, 2021 / 18:07

    Keith,
    Oh how lovely! “Shiny cherries dangle like musical notes” … and from then on you transport us to fields of harvest and the resting land. Beautiful.
    pax,
    dora

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 13, 2021 / 10:33

      That’s really kind of you Dora, I’m so pleased you liked it.

  28. Sharda's avatar Sharda September 22, 2021 / 15:45

    Wow, amazing! As I read the story I was transported into this magical world you created.

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