for Six Sentence Stories where the given word is Deal.
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Mellissa sat on the grass bank, her journey brought to a sudden halt as she’d broken down once again.
‘It’s time I got a new one’ she said to herself.
‘This is fantastic value’ said the slick salesman ‘but if you want something really special and feel like splashing out, this one’s state of the art’.
‘I really like it, how much?’ Melissa enquired.
‘Eleven’ he said, ‘nine’ she replied, ‘ten’ he said thrusting out his hand, ‘deal’ she agreed.
Carbon fibre bristles, an ebony handle, vertical takeoff, and zero to a hundred in three seconds, Melissa was the envy of her fellow witches.
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Thanks to GirliOnTheEdge for hosting.
Brilliant, Keith! Is it a Super-Nimbus 2000?
Guess you’re a Harry Potter fan! Do you have one? !!
Good one Keith
Thanks so much, Sadje.
You’re welcome
Love it! I That was a real surprise! Hm, reminds me, I must go shopping… 😉
Please don’t tell me you are ‘one of them’! Cheers Jenne.
No, but a century ago when I went on a school trip to visit Roman remains(??) we picked up a guide in Wigan. She told us she was a white witch and had made a spell to keep the rain away. We had fine weather until we deposited her back in Wigan. Then the heavens opened!!
Ooo-err!
super duper and excellent!
I couldn’t ask for a nicer comment!
Fun story. Must dust mine off Keith……………….
I daren’t comment Di!
Ha! Broomsticks are easier to park Keith.
See you’ve changed your avatar pic.
Well spotted!
I like the haggling to reach a fair price for that new broomstick. I didn’t realize she was a witch until the end.
Mission accomplished then! Thanks, Frank.
Very cute, Keith. And educational! I’m embarrassed to say I am not up on my Harry Potter, lol.
Hm…I could use one of those Super-Nimbus 2000’s 😆
Don’t worry, nor am I, Denise!
Since I wrote this, sales of that broom have gone sky high!
Well done!
Thanks, Mimi.
That was a high flying magical last line!
I like that! Thanks so much.
SO THAT’S how it’s done!
(scribbling a note to herself)
Now you know!