A short story …

for Friday Fictioneers

 

lovemy.regular

 

BG‘I know what Keith’s getting you for your birthday’ said Polly.

‘What?’ asked my friend Rosey.

‘Can’t say’

‘A clue?’

‘Begins with B’

‘Booze,  botox,  boob-job?’

‘No’

‘Another clue?’

‘Ends N’

‘I know, a witches broom so I can fly!  No that ends M.  Oh, a balloon ….’

‘Stop!’ interrupted Polly.  ‘Me and my big mouth.  Bye Rosey’.

Rosey was so excited.  She’d always wanted a hot-air balloon ride.  She dug out her passport in case it was windy and they blew to France!

Rosey’s birthday.  A box arrived.  My present.  She opened it and out floated a big balloon.

Sorry, Rosey!

 

ronda-povThanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Ronda Del Boccio for the photo.

Burst Froggie’s balloon to see what others have been up to!

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74 thoughts on “A short story …

  1. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly June 10, 2020 / 15:45

    Knowing Rosey, this was the safer present to get her. One wonders what mishap would occur if she was in a hot air balloon!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 11, 2020 / 10:25

      I don’t even like to think about it! Mind you, it could make another story!

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon June 10, 2020 / 15:49

    Rosey will find the good in it, I’m sure

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje June 10, 2020 / 16:22

    Ha. Good one. 😉

  4. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff June 10, 2020 / 18:41

    Dear Keith,

    From what you’ve told us about Rosey, I’m thinking the balloon you got her was a better option. 😉 Cute story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 11, 2020 / 10:13

      I certainly wouldn’t want to be a fellow passenger on a balloon flight with her! Thanks, Rochelle.

  5. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli June 10, 2020 / 19:01

    Maybe next year’s birthday… I like her thinking she needs her passport in case the balloon floats to France. Rosy thinks big. Sheer delight in the dialogue and an inventive story for the picture, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 11, 2020 / 10:14

      Thanks so much for your generous words.I’m so pleased you enjoyed it.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli June 12, 2020 / 00:03

        My pleasure, Keith.

  6. Anthony North's avatar Anthony North June 10, 2020 / 20:37

    You could say she felt deflated. Nice one.

  7. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda June 10, 2020 / 20:39

    Poor Rosey …
    Then again, she might just have to take matters into her own hands …

  8. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings June 10, 2020 / 22:52

    Perhaps all of her friends could chip in and together get her that balloon ride. She would love it.

  9. plaridel's avatar plaridel June 11, 2020 / 07:13

    like they say, it’s the thought that counts. 🙂

  10. ceayr's avatar ceayr June 11, 2020 / 15:42

    I think she should burst you, ya big balloon!

  11. Gabriella's avatar Gabriella June 11, 2020 / 17:47

    At least, Rosey got the safe option!

  12. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young June 11, 2020 / 18:07

    Only one balloon? That’s a bit mean.

  13. draliman's avatar draliman June 11, 2020 / 19:25

    Aw, I feel sorry for poor Rosey. I hope she gets her balloon ride one day! Though, knowing Rosey, that might be a recipe for disaster.

  14. Dale's avatar Dale June 11, 2020 / 19:48

    That’s what happens when big mouths give too much away. It creates unreasonable expectations!
    Poor Rosey – though, we are all safer this way, methinks.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 12, 2020 / 10:09

      You are, especially if she was planning on flying low over your garden!

      • Dale's avatar Dale June 12, 2020 / 12:34

        Haha!

  15. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti June 11, 2020 / 23:40

    Knowing Rosie she may even be able to handle a balloon ride to France~

  16. cathrynanne24's avatar cathrynanne24 June 12, 2020 / 12:57

    Aww not the balloon she was hoping for but safer I guess. Especially after what happened in my story 😱

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 13, 2020 / 16:45

      True, power lines and balloons are not a good combination!

  17. granonine's avatar granonine June 12, 2020 / 17:43

    Will she laugh at the joke, or pop him in the nose? Cute story, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 13, 2020 / 16:07

      Probably the latter, and well-deserved! Thanks, Linda.

  18. Tannille's avatar Tannille June 13, 2020 / 06:43

    Should have gone with that boobjob haha.
    Great stuff K!

  19. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 June 13, 2020 / 18:07

    Poor Rosey! I’m sure she would have stood very still in the basket and not rushed from side to side exclaiming at how high they were already…er, alright, perhaps she’d have moved just a teensy bit!
    Cute story, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 14, 2020 / 16:22

      Oh, she’s be all over place believe me! Cheers Penny.

  20. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell June 14, 2020 / 09:27

    Eeeep! That’s the thing about expectations and also with imagination! You don’t usually get what you expect

  21. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan June 14, 2020 / 11:43

    A sort of deflated surprise for Rosey. Her possible trip to France was scuppered, perhaps she needs a break.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings June 14, 2020 / 16:10

      We don’t live far from the ferry to France so I might just treat her! Cheers James.

  22. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max June 14, 2020 / 11:46

    I’m responding to ‘Obdurate’ — like the obdurate energy of your illustration ,especially the final phrase, man’s right to leave the toilet seat up !!!

  23. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug June 14, 2020 / 18:40

    That Polly has a big mouth. I hope Rosey wasn’t too disappointed.

  24. Russell Gayer's avatar Russell Gayer June 15, 2020 / 13:15

    I chuckled when I read the line about the passport. A fun piece, Keith.

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