I’m still here you know. You all thought I perished when my cottage collapsed the other night. None of you shed a tear for me, did you? But you didn’t know about the tunnel where I sought refuge.
I’d served time for a crime I didn’t commit. You all despised me and thought me guilty. But it wasn’t me. When I returned home the real perpetrator worried the truth would out. So he tried disposing of me by destroying my home with me inside.
Didn’t you!
You think I’m dead. A dead man can’t commit murder. I’m coming for you.
Soon, very soon.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers and to Jean L Hays for the picture.
Excellent Keith!
Thank you so much.
Look Keith, be reasonable, it was just an accident. We had no idea you had survived!
There’s another ‘accident’ about to happen, Iain!
Dang, missed you!
Very dark from you, Keith, not many laughs in there!
Don’t worry, it won’t last!
Well, since he’s already paid for it….
Nothing can harm him now! Cheers Alice
I’m going to be on the look out for him!
If you are the guilty party that would be wise! Cheers Danny
Oh, nicely done. A tale to spark worry and fear.
That’s the plan! Cheers Mimi.
Eerie. I love it!
Well then … eerie, this one! 😉
Just a bit! Thanks Na’ama.
I love your story. I wouldn’t want you seeking retribution on me!
Not to be recommended! Thank you.
You are welcome 🙂
I’m thinking it won’t be a quick and painless death…
Too right!
You shouldn’t point… it’s rude. But I understand the sentiments.
I know, but I am rude. I’ve been known to stick out my tongue!
That was really good, Keith. I loved the pointing finger. You brought us into the story. That type of revenge is bloodthirsty. Well done. —- Suzanne
I wouldn’t him pointing at me! Thanks for dropping by.
Ah sweet vengeance. Moral of the story, if you’re going to kill someone, kill them good.
He’ll certainly do that! Cheers Tannille
Nice, that picture so provokes some scary tales or what. You’ve kept me wondering about how this will work out
Not well for the guilty party I fear! Cheers Larry
Oh no, now he becomes a true criminal. He should just walk away! But, seems determined at vengeance. I really enjoyed the voice in the story.
There’s no stopping him now! Thanks so much Brenda.
Very good – and his fate is well-deserved.
It certainly is. Thanks Liz.
Revenge served up cold.Lovely.
Indeed it is! Thanks Patrick.
Was evil always or did his unfair treatment cause him to be evil?
A thoughtful piece…you’ve got me thinking!
The latter I imagine but even I’m not sure!. Thanks Dawn
This has real power.
Cheers Robert
Dear Keith,
This is deliciously dark. Well done.
Shalom
Rochelle
Thanks so much Rochelle
You had a crappy lawyer. How is it our fault?
And you have no idea how much I cried…
Now you’re making me feel guilty!
😂
Ohhhhhh, love it! People are quick to judge, not caring about the facts. I hope he gets his life back.
this probably occurs more often than we imagine. Thanks Sascha.
The real perpetrator beware. Karma will catch up with him.
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Just when he thought he’d got away with it! Cheers Kalpana
Hi there! After doing fiction all through AtoZ, I’ve started my own Fiction Fridays. I don’t have a link up, but if you ever feel like participating, I’m putting out a prompt (given to me through my comments) for the next week. I’m still going through the AtoZ Master LIst, so that’s where I found you.
Doesn’t Speak Klingon
A complete mini crime drama- I think the innocent one means business ! His victim should be afraid, very afraid….
…cue the creepy music! Cheers WWM
Oooo i love where you took this.. Great write Keith.
Thanks Violet
Epistolary fiction in a flash, and addressed to the reader. An ingenious and very effective technique for this story, Keith. Well done!
I’m pleased it worked! Thanks for your generous words Penny.
Ooooooo. Loved this.
I’m pleased! Thank you.
Someone had better watch out. They are in big trouble. Good story!
They certainly are! Thanks so much Tessa.
Wow, Keith. One of your best, I think. The bitterness and hatred are palpable. I’m glad I don’t live in your neighborhood 🙂
That’s so kind of you. I think I might move away for a while!
Oh! I say run fast and run hard. Nicely done.
Worth a try but he’s very determined! Cheers Alicia
Oh, oh. Run for the hills.
Wise advice!
And here I thought dead men tell no tales….
…except mine! Cheers
Whoa!!!
I love the narrative styles you come up with, Keith! 😀
Genius! 🙂
Thank you SO much.
Somehow I think you have every right to be a bit pissed…
Absolutely! Cheers Bjorn
Ohhh, I feel so threatened! HAHAHA! Great story!
So you should!!!
Oooooo fantastic. A great piece
Thanks so much Laurie.