A soppy story…

for Sunday Photo Fiction

 

gaby.demo

They often walked together. There’s was a special friendship yet neither was sure if the other harboured deeper feelings; both nervous to express their heartfelt thoughts should it damage the perfect companionship they so relished.

The rain pitter-pattered as they strolled. Puddles gathered along the path. As they stepped over them he wondered if he dared offer her his hand. What if I was to grasp his she wondered?

They sought shelter beneath a blossoming tree and glanced into each other’s eyes.  Then, instead of raindrops, they were showered with dancing pink petals. No words passed their lips, they would only have spoilt that blissful moment.

 

spf-10-28-8-fandango-4Thanks to Susan Spaulding for hosting Sunday Photo Fiction and to Fandango for this week’s picture.

 

Prod the frog to see what others are up to!

2015-10-12_15h07_22

31 thoughts on “A soppy story…

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 12, 2019 / 18:55

    A nice story

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje May 13, 2019 / 00:42

        You’re welcome Keith

  2. Prior...'s avatar Prior... May 12, 2019 / 19:44

    delightful romance 🙂 and like the p words

      • Prior...'s avatar Prior... May 12, 2019 / 22:55

        😊💛

  3. ceayr's avatar ceayr May 12, 2019 / 22:08

    What are you all about?
    Pass the tissues

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 13, 2019 / 09:40

      I thought I’d try a rhyming reply – but I couldn’t! Cheers Mimi.

  4. Sascha Darlington's avatar Sascha Darlington May 13, 2019 / 02:32

    This is lovely…and then the cynic in me says that with all of their not wanting to spoil things, they’ll never get together.

  5. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb May 13, 2019 / 08:02

    Hi Keith – delightful … thank goodness people can still stop beneath the petal loosing blossom tree … cheers Hilary

      • hilarymb's avatar hilarymb May 13, 2019 / 09:37

        Yes … when one’s out and about the petals are falling it’s rather pretty. I think I spelt loosing wrong and it should be losing! Early morning …?! Wonderful day today, though windy here … enjoy the week …

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 13, 2019 / 09:41

      Not my normal style so I’m glad it worked! Thanks Neel.

  6. Denise D Hammond's avatar Denise D Hammond May 13, 2019 / 12:48

    Driving home yesterday I saw all those maple flowers and pollen lining the roads and it set off my allergies. Teary eyes, dripping nose…how romantic, lol.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 13, 2019 / 14:02

      Oh dear – I hope my tale didn’t have a similar effect!

  7. LucciaGray's avatar LucciaGray May 13, 2019 / 14:28

    That was a lovely story, for a change. So many have shocking endings, so it’s nice to read (and write) feel-good stories… must be spring:)

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 14, 2019 / 09:19

      I like a happy ending although I admit to not writing enough. Spring it is!

  8. Jules's avatar Jules May 14, 2019 / 00:32

    A fun romance can be a cherished read 🙂

  9. Abhijit Ray's avatar Abhijit Ray May 14, 2019 / 13:16

    Sometimes silence speaks louder than words. Beautifully done.

  10. Mike's avatar Mike May 15, 2019 / 00:53

    Cherry Blossom, a moment to cherish. Even if you are not into love stories

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 15, 2019 / 11:29

      All it took was a bit of blossom to send me soppy! Cheers Mike

  11. Alissa Spiehs-Apel's avatar Alissa Spiehs-Apel May 15, 2019 / 14:02

    Love the water reflection image! How wonderful, and pretty on all of them! Nebraska – where I live is more grasses than flowers. Not as pretty. It is cool where there are hills of it. – An Apel a Day

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 15, 2019 / 17:28

      In a a couple of weeks it’s back to grass again, but it’s lovely while it lasts.! Thanks Alissa

  12. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz May 18, 2019 / 14:15

    Well, this one seems to have caught you at a weak moment! hahaha “love”ly tale keith..

Leave a Reply