100 words

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Trevor was a cheeky little lad. Squirt, his schoolmates called him! True to his nickname, his lifelong job involved maintaining the fountain and hosing flower beds in the park.

The day he retired, he threw a coin in the fountain and made a wish. It never came true.

On his ninetieth birthday, he went back. The fountain stopped flowing years ago. Down among the dead leaves, he found his coin.

‘It’s soiled and worthless now’, he thought, ‘a bit like me’.

He threw it back and imagined he heard a splash.

‘It’s a sign’, he said, before remaking his wish.

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Click Squirt to visit the squares!

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers

PHOTO PROMPT © Nancy Richy

12 thoughts on “100 words”

  1. Neil MacDonald's avatar Neil MacDonald November 4, 2026 / 17:00

    Oh blithe spirit!

  2. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li November 4, 2026 / 18:18

    Beautiful in both a literal and metaphorical way, Keith. Wouldn’t you love to see him gather his tools and get the fountain burbling again?

  3. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬'s avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ November 4, 2026 / 21:20

    Hope spring eternal!

  4. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings November 4, 2026 / 22:09

    I hope it comes true this time. Nice story!

  5. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin November 4, 2026 / 22:24

    Nothing more powerful than hope. An excellent parable and message, Keith.

  6. beth's avatar beth November 5, 2026 / 01:53

    hope is what keeps us going

  7. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts November 5, 2026 / 03:59

    Oh, I so hope Squirt’s wish comes true in the end!

  8. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 5, 2026 / 04:56

    If only wishes came true that easily

  9. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta November 5, 2026 / 19:23

    I am so pleased he has never given up on hope – lovely story Keith 🩷

  10. imnobodywhoareyou's avatar imnobodywhoareyou November 5, 2026 / 19:24

    Gotta find something to keep you going.

  11. ceayr's avatar ceayr November 5, 2026 / 19:55

    Strangely philosophical for you, Keith.

    And excellent.

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