100 words

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Minutes before midnight. Moments ‘til her birthday. She stands in darkness atop the building, a gusty wind chilling her cheeks. Glancing over her shoulder, she watches as another year blows away taking with it broken promises, unhappy memories, and shattered dreams. 
 
As angry black clouds scurry from sight a new moon appears spreading a silver carpet of hope at her feet. Her long dark shadow tumbles into the gloomy bleak past as a cheery one appears.  
 
Suddenly all is calm. She gazes into the future and smiles as another year begins. A chance to start her life anew.

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6 thoughts on “100 words

  1. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander June 17, 2026 / 13:31

    Keith, I love the image of the new moon laying a silver carpet of hope at her feet. It makes her birthday feel like the start of a brand-new journey. 🌙

    Much love,
    David

  2. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz June 17, 2026 / 13:50

    I am so glad she came out of the darkness!

  3. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles June 17, 2026 / 14:12

    So far, most of the stories I’ve read based on the prompt (including the one I wrote) have been pessimistic. This one carried hope.

  4. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li June 17, 2026 / 18:37

    Great writing, Keith. Guardian angels can take many forms.

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