43 Words

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I watched, humbled by the the solemnity of the mourners filing past a flaming pyre as the soul of a lifeless body departed for paradise.

Remains were scattered in the flowing muddy water amid swirling petals and scraps of yellow fabric. 

The end.

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My piece was inspired by an incident I witnessed whilst walking along a river bank in Nepal. It seemed disrespectful to take photographs at the time, so I took  this one after the funeral was over.

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Thanks to Sammi Cox for hosting the Weekend Writing Prompt

19 thoughts on “43 Words

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz January 31, 2026 / 14:47

    I wish we still employed the funeral pyre- I wonder if I could put that in my will?

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 31, 2026 / 16:03

    Some cultures and religions have this way of saying goodbye.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 31, 2026 / 16:50

        👍🏼🙏🏼

  3. paeansunplugged's avatar paeansunplugged January 31, 2026 / 18:38

    Nepalis and hindu Indians cremate their dead.

  4. Ange's avatar Ange January 31, 2026 / 20:16

    A wonderful rendition of the ceremony Keith 🩷

  5. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings February 1, 2026 / 01:44

    I am very glad you were so respectful and waited to take a picture later.

    Don’t put your final instructions in your will, it isn’t read and filed until later, have a separate document for your family for the immediate wishes you have, such as about your funeral.

  6. Dale's avatar Dale February 1, 2026 / 17:39

    As far as I am concerned, all burials should be thus – return our ashes to the earth or wherever they fly to. Nicely done!

      • Dale's avatar Dale February 2, 2026 / 15:28

        And, let’s face it, there is a ridiculous expense incurred for all this nonsense.

  7. Balaka's avatar Balaka February 2, 2026 / 05:09

    Anta means the end in Sanskrit/Hindi. Humbling post. In the end, we all return to ashes.

  8. Natasha's avatar Natasha February 2, 2026 / 12:44

    This took me back to the oldest city in the world, Benaras or Varanasi, where the funeral pyre burns non-stop. Mythology says if ever the pyres stop burning in Benaras, the world will come to Anta/an end.

    What a humbling post. In the Hindu culture, this is how a funeral is conducted.
    Though I was born a Hindu, I always tell me family to bury me, where the ecosystem can feed off my physical remains. A return to the earth.

    Wonderful to be back on your blog, dear Keith.
    Look forward to more.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 2, 2026 / 15:40

      Thanks for dropping by and leaving such an interesting comment, Natasha. I’m so glad you’re back with us again.

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