54 Words

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Tom loves his drum kit. He loves his twin daughters too and he named them Anna-one, Anna-two, a cymbal of his affection for them. Just lately his neigbours have become annoyed by the noise and are promising repercussions if he doesn’t quieten things down. But he’s sticking to his drumming, they’ll not beat him!

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Thanks to Sammi Cox for hosting the Weekend Writing Prompt

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24 thoughts on “54 Words

  1. Vero's avatar Vero January 17, 2026 / 14:55

    Hilarious!!

      • Vero's avatar Vero January 17, 2026 / 15:11

        Welcome!!!

  2. Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶's avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶 January 17, 2026 / 15:24

    Too funny! You are so clever, dear Keith. I’m reminded of Ima Hogg, daughter of one-time Governor of Texas, Jim Hogg. Rumors started that Ima had a sister named Ura, but they were unfounded. Funny stuff, though …. Ima Hogg and Ura Hogg! 🐷

  3. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz January 17, 2026 / 15:40

    You are, as always, ever so clever!

  4. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta January 17, 2026 / 16:37

    Great sound effects Keith and ‘Anna-one, Anna-two,’ cracked me up🙌

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 17, 2026 / 16:41

    Hahaha 😂

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 19, 2026 / 00:48

        🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

  6. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin January 17, 2026 / 17:38

    Hilarious Keith. And drumroll to you for the ‘Annna-one’ and Anna-two. What a fabulous pun-jambalaya you’ve penned, Keith. Very cymbalic.

  7. Dale's avatar Dale January 17, 2026 / 19:14

    You are way to punny today! And that was way too much fun.

  8. Ron.'s avatar Ron. January 17, 2026 / 20:01

    Very cool

  9. beth's avatar beth January 17, 2026 / 23:26

    love those daughters’ names

  10. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings January 18, 2026 / 00:57

    Nicely punny, and tell him to get a drum machine with headphones, it will help with the neighbors.

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