100 words!

Keith's Ramblings

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Oy, you clumsy clot, look what you’ve done!

Ooops, sorry about that.

You should look where you’re going!

Guess what I bumped into the other day.

No idea, what?

Everything, which is why I’ve  decided to get some glasses!

You should have eaten more carrots when you were young.

Why?

Because they contain vitamin see!

As well as sight there are four other senses, touch, smell, hearing, and, erm, it’s on the tip of my tongue…..!

Nonsense in your case!

Seriously though, I need to get going.

Why, what are you doing today?

Collecting my glasses, then…… I’ll see!

Prod Froggie to visit the squares

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PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers

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50 thoughts on “100 words!”

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff Nov 26, 2025 / 15:11

    Dear Keith,

    A very inSIGHTful dialogue. On the other hand some people are just natural klutzes. 😉 Made me smile.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. Dale's avatar Dale Nov 26, 2025 / 20:55

    Hahaha! For some, glasses won’t fix what ails them 😉

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  6. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li Nov 26, 2025 / 21:14

    Vitamin See, I love it. My kids are always after me to get glasses.

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      • theministryofshrawleywalks's avatar theministryofshrawleywalks Nov 27, 2025 / 23:19

        Good luck, my glasses are falling apart, I’m hoping they’ll last till Christmas then I’ll treat my self to some new snazzy ones next year!

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  10. Linda's avatar Linda Nov 27, 2025 / 00:40

    I also hope things clear up soon, Keith!

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  11. Will's avatar Will Nov 27, 2025 / 02:26

    A visionary story, Keith. Eye opening.

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  13. Forestwood's avatar Forestwood Nov 27, 2025 / 07:00

    Is the carrot thing still a thing parents say to their kids?

    Fun story – thanks Keith.

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      • Forestwood's avatar Forestwood Nov 27, 2025 / 21:51

        You are right, Keith. Parents were once the font of all knowledge so it was never questioned when I was a child.

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  14. Sadje's avatar Sadje Nov 27, 2025 / 09:58

    Haha! He definitely needs glasses and some common sense 😂😂😂

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  18. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta Nov 27, 2025 / 16:47

    This made me laugh – a proper Mr Magoo – I loved that cartoon 😄

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  20. Prior...'s avatar Prior... Nov 27, 2025 / 21:26

    Keith – humor comes so esy for you – I know I say that often – but love your play on words and humor –

    and by the way, vitamin see, I mean vitamin C in carrots – did you hear about how the myth was started?

    I heard when English folks began using radar in WWII – they had to come up with reasons why their pilots were doing so well and started the carrot myth about it being good for vision

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  22. Kimberly's avatar Kimberly Nov 30, 2025 / 18:54

    The playful puns, the cheeky jabs, the “vitamin see” twist—it all works together like a lighthearted comedy sketch. This is the kind of humor that brightens the moment without trying too hard, the sort that makes people chuckle and say, “Alright, that was clever.” And truly, we need more of that kind of joy, for “a cheerful heart doeth good like a medicine” (Proverbs 17:22). I enjoyed your words very much.

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