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She wandered along the beach, pebbles crunching beneath her feet. ‘Reach for the sky and cast aside the clouds’, a voice whispered in her ear.  Flowers amid the rocks gazed skyward, waves cast a thousand sparkling crystals into the air. Her heart was filled with blissful hope.

‘Reach high, reach far, and you shall touch paradise’, said the voice.  She stretched her arm higher and higher, hand held open in eager anticipation. The suns’ warm rays kissed her palm. 

Then she tripped on a rock, fell and broke her leg. ‘I’ll call the air ambulance’, the voice sighed.

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Grab Froggie to visit the squares!

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers

PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook

49 thoughts on “98 words

  1. Neil MacDonald's avatar Neil MacDonald November 19, 2025 / 14:54

    That’s what you get for listening to your digital assistant

  2. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz November 19, 2025 / 16:44

    Never listen to the voices in your head! hehehe

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 19, 2025 / 17:04

      I never ever listen to…… Sorry, a voice in my head just intrupted me!

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 19, 2025 / 16:44

    Oops! Was going well till the twist in the end

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 19, 2025 / 17:17

      Indeed, a shame it wasn’t just a twist in the ankle!

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje November 20, 2025 / 01:04

        Haha!

  4. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan November 19, 2025 / 19:10

    I hope Rosie is okay and her leg mends. Sorry to ask, was she listening to her phone?

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 16:50

      It takes more than that to dampen her spirits. Phone? No doubt about it!

  5. Prior...'s avatar Prior... November 19, 2025 / 20:54

    this was good because those rocks do look like they are rough walking terrain

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:01

      They look just like the rocks at the foot of the cliff at the end of our beach, flowers and all!

      • Prior...'s avatar Prior... November 21, 2025 / 19:47

        so cool that they look alike

  6. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles November 19, 2025 / 21:39

    “This one, a long time have I watched. All his life has he looked away, to the future, to the horizon. Never his mind on where he was. Hm? What he was doing!” -Yoda

  7. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li November 19, 2025 / 21:40


    I don’t think I’ve ever laughed at a person breaking their leg, but today it was warranted. Your “voice” characterization was just right.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:14

      Don’t worry, Lisa, even Rosey laughed in the end!

      • Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li November 21, 2025 / 18:26

        🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:15

      I would, you would – but would Rosey? I fear not!

  8. beth's avatar beth November 19, 2025 / 23:46

    well, famous last words, but at least she had/has hope!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:17

      She always has hope – she’s a proper half-glass-full kinda gal!

  9. Nandini Deka's avatar Nandini Deka November 20, 2025 / 07:35

    nice twist…sad for her though…

  10. Sandra's avatar Sandra November 20, 2025 / 07:51

    These voices, they love to lead you astray. Good one.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:31

      So true, Sandra, they’ve taken me all over the place!

  11. justjoyfulness's avatar justjoyfulness November 20, 2025 / 10:44


    At least the voice knows to dial the air ambulance.

  12. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta November 20, 2025 / 12:02

    And the moral is – never listen to those pesky voices, and watch where you are going of course! 😄Loved your reading Keith – do you amdram?

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:35

      Wise words, Ange, I hope she read them!

      Amdram? No, but I was on the radio for a while!

      • poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta November 21, 2025 / 23:04

        What in – not my favourite The Archers?

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 22, 2025 / 15:57

        I wish – I’m an Archers superfan! The makers of Corrie and Eastenders could learn a lot from listening to it – a proper soap opera!

        I just had a weekly food and drink progranmme on local radio.

  13. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff November 20, 2025 / 12:27

    Dear Keith,

    At least the voice seemed to be supportive in case of emergency. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  14. Dale's avatar Dale November 20, 2025 / 12:45

    The Voice forgot to say to watch your step as you reach! Thankfully, it was alert enough to call for help…

    You always make me smile, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:48

      It’s a polite voice so I imagine it apologised!

      Delighted to have amused you, Dale,

      • Dale's avatar Dale November 21, 2025 / 18:18

        Well, at least there is that 🙂

  15. plaridel's avatar plaridel November 20, 2025 / 22:01

    sounds like rosie. i hope not. 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2025 / 17:53

      It was, but she made me promiose not to tell anyone! Oh, I just have!

  16. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin November 22, 2025 / 14:05

    Oh no! Excellent parable, Keith. Care must be taken with what one hears. Well done!

  17. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall November 24, 2025 / 11:01


    Hmm, another ‘oops’ perhaps? Good one, Keith!

  18. Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶's avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️🎶 November 26, 2025 / 02:43

    This is a classic …. something I’d expect to see on one of the great UK comedies. Well done, dear Keith.

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