Two goes!

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I don’t what happened. Last time we wandered along the shore she was skipping, running, jumping. 

The laughter we shared still rings in my ears. Usually she is frivolous, seeming never to have a serious thought in her head. 

Unrefined at times too, but those unexpected bursts are what make her endearing, funny, even more amicable.

Today the beach is the same, the sea is the same. Only she is different.

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She sits and stares

Unocused eyes swimming to the horizon 

gazing into infinity

 

No sign of tears 

Her expressionless face an empty canvas 

a sea of pallor 

 

I look into her eyes 

I see nothing but a swirling mist of grey 

that sparkle gone 

 

I ask her why 

A cloud of despair envelopes her 

She hears me not 

 

I will wait 

I’ll stay by her side as long as it takes 

for her to return 

 

But for now 

she inhabits a sorrowful place of her own 

Somewhere 

 

I know not where.

.

 

© Ayr/Gray

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Thanks to Jenne Gray and CEAyr for hosting The Unicorn Challenge

21 thoughts on “Two goes!

  1. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz Jan 24, 2025 / 20:33

    This was the soundtrack for helplessness. Both of them. What a sad sorrowful place to be. You caught the feeling perfectly.

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  2. ceayr's avatar ceayr Jan 24, 2025 / 21:12

    Sometimes, my friend, you surpass yourself.

    The story is excellent, the poem better.

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings Jan 26, 2025 / 15:12

      I can’t thank you enough, C.E. Poetry is not really my thing, so I’m pleased you found it okay!

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  3. jenne49's avatar jenne49 Jan 24, 2025 / 22:17

    This is so beautiful and so sad, Keith.
    But infused with hope too.
    Just perfect.

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  4. Forestwood's avatar Forestwood Jan 25, 2025 / 07:50

    Lovely words with that feeling of sadness when people change. Especially hard when you cannot reach them.

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings Jan 26, 2025 / 16:08

      I always describe myself as a reluctant poet! It’s not a form of writing I’m keen on which make your kind words seem all the more special. Thank you so much, Nancy.

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