100 words

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For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt.

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He often sits on the pavement near the bar, strumming his battered guitar and singing. He’s not bad actually. Some passers-by stop to listen then drop a coin or two in his upturned cap. 

Later,  he’ll sling his guitar over his shoulder and head to a cafe for a warm drink and a bite to eat.

On the way, he’ll drop by  a charity shop and give them the money he’s collected.  He’ll forever be grateful to the organisation that runs it.  Many years ago it came to his rescue when he was homeless and sleeping rough on the streets.

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Prod Froggie to see the squares!

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PHOTO PROMPT © Lori Wilson

41 thoughts on “100 words

  1. Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh October 16, 2024 / 14:10

    That’s so heartwarming. Good that he didn’t forget the ones who stood by him when he needed then the most. Lovely take on the prompt, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 16, 2024 / 15:35

      Thanks, Shweta, I’d like to think that most do.

      I’ve been sitting on this story for a while waiting for an appropriate prompt!

      • Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh October 16, 2024 / 19:08

        Ohhh it’s great that you found the prompt you were looking for. Wonderful tale, Keith.

  2. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin October 16, 2024 / 14:29

    Beautiful! Love the his giving heart. Well done, Keith!

  3. CGraith's avatar CGraith October 16, 2024 / 14:54

    I love this! One of the greatest gifts we can give to our fellow man/woman is help whatever that is, food, clothing, a listening ear. I looked up the organization in your photo. I love their mission to basically step in and give what’s needed in a person’s current state. Your little story is a great tribute.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 16, 2024 / 15:39

      They are based in my town and warm up the homeless in several other seaside towns along my part of the coast. Thank you for taking an interest, and for your kind words about my story.

  4. Anita's avatar Anita October 16, 2024 / 15:33

    That’s “Thanksgiving” everyday.

    Great work!

  5. Neil MacDonald's avatar Neil MacDonald October 16, 2024 / 16:15

    Homelessness in the richest countries of the world is a scandal and a matter of shame

  6. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan October 16, 2024 / 21:34

    As we learn, there are many reasons for being homeless. We can only be grateful, someone cares to help.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 17, 2024 / 17:23

      Indeed there are, for some it’s even a life choice. Thanks, James.

  7. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings October 16, 2024 / 21:47

    We have such a place here, all of the downtown churches help support it, and some of our members are volunteers.

  8. beth's avatar beth October 16, 2024 / 23:31

    So kind

  9. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller October 16, 2024 / 23:33

    Very touching story Keith. Your MC has such a huge heart to remember and payback the place that took care of him. I love that you provided a link in your story as well; that organization is providing a great service for the homeless.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 17, 2024 / 17:53

      It’s very high-profile in my town – I can actually see it’s distribution centre from where I’m sitting right now – it’a always busy!

  10. Kritika's avatar Kritika October 17, 2024 / 03:18

    This is super! Such people are the need of the world. The shop looks great. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 17, 2024 / 17:54

      My pleasure, Kritika. It’s a great shop, one of several similar ones in my neighbouring towns.

      • Kritika's avatar Kritika October 18, 2024 / 06:52

        It would be a delight for the ones who need it the most. Thank you for sharing. I like the idea.

  11. Natasha's avatar Natasha October 17, 2024 / 05:36

    What a fuzzy, heart-warming tale. Like a piping hot mug of hot chocolate on a nippy autumn day, lending us that warm, cosy snuggle.

    Loved it, Keith. This planet needs more humans like him.

    Been a while, and it’s great to be back and reading you.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 17, 2024 / 17:56

      I love where my tale took you, Natasha!

      It’s been a while indeed!

  12. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff October 17, 2024 / 13:06

    Dear Keith,

    A very sweet story of giving back. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  13. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb October 18, 2024 / 14:07

    Well done Keith – turning that concept on its head … I expect there are many that give back … thankfully. Cheers Hilary

  14. plaridel's avatar plaridel October 18, 2024 / 17:37

    this story pulled my heartstrings to the core. one of your best.

  15. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli October 19, 2024 / 22:38

    Keith you touched my heart with this one. Giving back is what it’s all about. Great “twist.” You read it just right. <3

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 20, 2024 / 17:47

      I can’t thank you enough for your kind words, Lisa.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli October 20, 2024 / 19:14

        <3

  16. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell October 20, 2024 / 20:25

    Oh this is a lovely story. Paying it back or forward for the help he recieved. A beautiful message here.

  17. Angela Adams's avatar Angela Adams October 20, 2024 / 23:01

    I love this on so many levels. Well done!

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