249 words

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I suddenly sneezed that day. I was walking from the front door to my car before driving to work. Had I not sneezed, I wouldn’t have stood still for thirty seconds to blow my nose.

If I’d not lost those thirty seconds, that blue car wouldn’t have beaten me to my favourite parking space opposite my firm’s office.

Had I not parked over the other side I wouldn’t have stupidly scraped the door of that grey car whilst pulling into the space. I left an apologetic note containing my phone number under its windscreen wiper.

Had I not left that note I’d never have met the owner of that car. Coincidentally, he worked for a company on the floor above mine in the office block.  We met in the foyer to exchange insurance details.

Considering the circumstances, we got on surprisingly well! I offered to buy him a drink after work by way of an apology and he accepted.

If he’d not, I would never have met an acquaintance of his, a charming young lady who was there with some friends, one of whom was particularly alluring!

Apparently, they went there every Friday, so I thought I’d drop by the following week and try chatting her up!

Had I not, we wouldn’t have started dating and six months later, marrying! 

That was five years ago. Unfortunately things didn’t go well and we are getting a divorce, an expensive one in my case.

If only I hadn’t sneezed that day.

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Thanks to Jenne Gray and CEAyr for hosting The Unicorn Challenge

© Ayr/Gray

35 thoughts on “249 words”

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje September 22, 2024 / 16:44

    What a domino effect of happenings
    👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje September 23, 2024 / 15:50

        Yes, as it often happens in life too.

  2. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin September 22, 2024 / 16:44

    Wow what a set of circumstances set in motion by one act. Isn’t that how life goes? Well done, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 23, 2024 / 14:54

      It’s not just our lives that are affected by our actions, but others we meet along the way too. Cheers, Suzette.

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin September 23, 2024 / 15:52

        Well said Keith. I agree. Thank you!

  3. lifelessons's avatar lifelessons September 22, 2024 / 16:53

    Ha. A great response to the prompt. Very clever! You had me… I was getting ready to repeat my timeworn statement that the worst things in our lives can lead to the best ones. Now I have to alter it..the worst things can lead to the best things that lead to the worst ones! Did anything good happen as a result of the divorce? This could become a really long adage.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 23, 2024 / 15:09

      I like your statement in both its forms! I’d like to think something positive transpired. Thanks for dropping by and sharing your thoughts.

  4. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 September 22, 2024 / 17:21

    Love this. Shame it didn’t work out.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 23, 2024 / 15:14

      Thanks, Di. It may turn out to be a good thing after all – who knows? I doubt it though!

  5. beth's avatar beth September 22, 2024 / 18:01

    ❤️

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 23, 2024 / 15:33

      If he hadn’t, it would be a completely different chain of events.

  6. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller September 23, 2024 / 04:35

    If only! How I look forward to your clever and entertaining stories each week, dear Keith. Bravo!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 23, 2024 / 15:36

      Awww, thank you Nancy, writing thses Baaamy stories provides me with the most enjoyable moments of my week!

  7. Kritika's avatar Kritika September 23, 2024 / 08:07

    An expensive sneeze I must say. 😀

      • Kritika's avatar Kritika September 24, 2024 / 14:13

        Cheers!

  8. clark's avatar clark September 23, 2024 / 16:11

    don’t tell anyone…. but I liked the path of your story so much that I was thinking about my Comment rather than read the final sentence. Then I read the comments. But! Too late. I was caught in what I would have typed, ‘The Roar of the Butterfly’

    so the question: does a lack of concentration imply an unnecessarily optimistic view of the world or, is it an example of some of us, through Emotional Natural Selection* finding ways to see the world as we prefer?

    … Fun Six!**

    *not a ‘real’ theory of evolution

    ** lol

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 24, 2024 / 16:28

      I’m delighted you became so immersed in my tail! You ask an interesting questiion, one I’m unable to answer!

  9. clark's avatar clark September 23, 2024 / 16:13

    ok… not a word.

    I knew I was at ‘the ‘corn and not at the Six Sentence Story! Really. (I should be concerned, but this is a virtual world so who’s to say what is real and/or consistent.)

  10. ceayr's avatar ceayr September 23, 2024 / 21:33

    As someone – Shakespeare or Mark Twain or somebody – Life’s a bowl of toenail clippings.

    I suggest less pepper on your porridge, old mucker!

    • ceayr's avatar ceayr September 23, 2024 / 21:34

      Please insert ‘once said’ in appropriate place!

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 24, 2024 / 16:31

        …duly done, as instructed!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 24, 2024 / 16:31

      What inspirational quote! As for the pepper, I’ll heed you sage-like advice!

  11. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough September 24, 2024 / 02:17

    This is a story that keeps on giving. If you hadn’t been walking out of divorce court that morning, you’d never have met…or got hit by that skateboarder and…

  12. jenne49's avatar jenne49 September 24, 2024 / 11:46

    So, obviously the story will domino on as you come out of the divorce court….
    Fun story, but with a wee serious core – love it, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 24, 2024 / 16:35

      Joking apart, I often wonder ‘what if’. Everything we do has an impact on those we encounter, and they on us.

      • jenne49's avatar jenne49 September 24, 2024 / 19:40

        And often an impact we know nothing about – maybe sometimes that’s just as well! 😉

  13. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall September 24, 2024 / 14:24

    Oh, oh, oh…. etc… Excellent, Keith!

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