A promise

I prefer not to reuse pieces from the past, but as soon as I saw this week’s picture my mind was transported back to 2017 and a vignette I wrote for Friday Fictioneers. It received one of the largest number of comments I’ve ever been blessed with including quite a few from our current blogging community!

Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?

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She slips in and out of the shadows, hiding in the dank 

alleyway. Dressed to allure, she slides into view 

when a prospective client 

appears.

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She came here on a promise from her home overseas, lured by

 a job, a home and a future; to send much-needed

money to her parents, her brother,

 her sister.

Little did she know what

awaited her.

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Concealed at a safe distance, her sinister pimp watches 

 his terrified victim as she plies his 

loathsome trade.

One day she will disappear; unknown, anonymous.

No name just a number.

She’ll be replaced by another,

and another,

and another

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Image credit: Engin Akyurt Unsplash

23 thoughts on “A promise

  1. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin Aug 5, 2024 / 16:44

    Well penned Keith. A deeply moving poem. You presented a truth few have the courage to bring into the light. Thank you for reposting this one. This story deserves to be told and re-told, in my opinion.

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje Aug 5, 2024 / 17:13

    This is indeed a heartbreaking reality that most people prefer to ignore. So many innocent lives have been ruined under the guise of opportunities. Thanks for writing about this important issue.

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      • Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough Aug 6, 2024 / 16:58

        I doubt lack of awareness is the problem. As long as it’s lucrative for criminals to enslave young women in the sex trade, it goes on.

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      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings Aug 6, 2024 / 17:19

        Indeed Christine, it’s been that way since time immemorial there’s no end in sight.

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  3. Dale's avatar Dale Aug 5, 2024 / 17:48

    Oh, I feel I remember this one, Keith. Such a sad life for these girls…

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  4. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings Aug 6, 2024 / 16:20

    We have too many of those here. The constant fight to help them goes on, there’s even a special house where the victims can recover, but more space is always needed. It’s awful.

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    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings Aug 6, 2024 / 17:29

      Sadly those that help are outnumbered by those that continue to persue their evil ways.

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  5. Indira's avatar Indira Aug 7, 2024 / 17:10

    This is so heart breaking and moving piece, Keith. Children also, both boys and girls are consumed in this buisness. There are so many NGOs trying to help but this mafia is much more powerful. Very well penned piece.

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