100 Words

...for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers (on a Wednesday) photo prompt!

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Let me read it to you!

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Young people today, hmph, just look at them. 

In my days, girls would never have dressed in such a wanton manner. And as for that scruffy tyke, words fail me. Don’t they teach them to shave any more?

Look at them, swigging from cans of beer. Listen to the racket they’re making! Disgraceful. 

Where are they going? What’s that noise? It’s getting louder and louder. Over there, in the square, it’s one of those guitar-strumming mobs that passes for a band these days.

What’s happening to me? 

My feet are twitching. 

I’m dancing!

I like it! 

I’m having fun!

YEAH!

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49 thoughts on “100 Words

  1. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles November 8, 2023 / 15:10

    I have to remind myself of what kids did and how kids dressed when I was a kid.

  2. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough November 8, 2023 / 16:00

    “But the magic’s in the music and the music’s in me. Tra-la-la…”
    Definitely a unique take on the prompt! I’d have guessed those are weary night-shift workers heading home. 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 9, 2023 / 16:18

      Beautifully sung Christine!
      You could well be right.

  3. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon November 8, 2023 / 16:18

    Never too late for an old dog

  4. granonine's avatar granonine November 8, 2023 / 17:06

    And so speak parents and grandparents down through the ages 🙂

  5. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 8, 2023 / 18:08

    At last he too is having fun.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 9, 2023 / 16:40

      There’s life in the old fool yet! Cheers, Sadje

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje November 9, 2023 / 17:05

        🙏🏼👍🏼🙏🏼

  6. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli November 9, 2023 / 00:47

    Keith you always have creative ideas for your stories. I like how he went from being curmudgeon to party animal. Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 9, 2023 / 17:04

      That’s so nice of you Lisa! Better than going from a party animal to a curmudgeon!

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli November 9, 2023 / 23:08

        LOL that’s the next day’s hangover 🙂

  7. beth's avatar beth November 9, 2023 / 01:32

    No time or age limit on fun

  8. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin November 9, 2023 / 03:43

    Music does have a way of breaking down barriers. Nicely done, Keith. You kept up the suspense til the end!

  9. authorfleurl's avatar authorfleurl November 9, 2023 / 09:31

    Therre’s no such thing as old when music gets involved! Nice one, Keith 🙂

      • authorfleurl's avatar authorfleurl November 10, 2023 / 07:53

        It certainly does! I’ve seen a video clip on Facebook of a bunch of guys in their 60s dancing like 13 year olds to a heavy metal song! Releasing the inner child!

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 10, 2023 / 14:18

        Now that, I’d love to see!

  10. Maria Michaela's avatar Maria Michaela November 9, 2023 / 09:57

    Music is universal. Glad he’s dancing

  11. Margaret's avatar Margaret November 9, 2023 / 12:14

    I’m glad he’s given up curmudgeoning. No fun at all. Fun story.

  12. Dahlia's avatar Dahlia November 9, 2023 / 12:30

    Haha – a fun story!

  13. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan November 9, 2023 / 19:52

    Can’t beat them, so join them. Fun story.

  14. athling2001's avatar athling2001 November 9, 2023 / 22:07

    Well done. I like that he is having fun finally.

  15. Patricia's avatar Patricia November 10, 2023 / 16:08

    Never too old to enjoy music and dancing!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 10, 2023 / 17:38

      I quite agree, Patricia, and I don’t just mean the waltz!

  16. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young November 10, 2023 / 16:26

    Even now my feet twitch when the beat moves me!

  17. plaridel's avatar plaridel November 10, 2023 / 18:47

    it must be the 60s and the 70s. those were the days. 🙂

  18. The Sicilian Storyteller's avatar The Sicilian Storyteller November 11, 2023 / 10:36

    “What’s the matter with kids today?” Every parent’s lament! Great story, Keith, with an unexpected fun ending.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 11, 2023 / 16:20

      It is, grandparents too as I should know! Thanks so much, Nancy.

  19. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff November 12, 2023 / 11:38

    Dear Keith,

    I recently opened a fortune cookie to find “As soon as you feel too old to do a thing, do it.” 😀 Love this little story. Keep on dancing.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  20. Tannille's avatar Tannille November 13, 2023 / 03:29

    Feet have a mind of their own!

  21. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug November 13, 2023 / 20:54

    Dancing is forbidden! No generation understands those before or after, but we’re more similar than different.

  22. Inside the Mind of Isadora's avatar Inside the Mind of Isadora November 13, 2023 / 21:04

    Oh those wild young rascals, making noise and carrying on when old curmudgeons
    want to nap or have quiet. LOL I must say this reminded me of my hubby. He so dislikes
    when kids or grandkids make unnecessary noise. Could it be a guy thing??? 😂
    Fun tale, Keith

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