What she saw…

A short story for Sadje’s What Do You See? photo prompt.

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‘One Day My Prince Will Come’ they played as she strolled past the bandstand.  

Is today the day my prince will come? 

She meandered between beds of nodding flowers.

Is this a sign?

He was handsome and his puppy, really cute.  He smiled enchantingly and she smiled sweetly in return.

Is this him?

“Hi,” he said. 

“Hello,” said she.

She gazed into his glinting eyes. He gazed into hers.

Is he my prince?

The puppy tilted its head to one side.

“He likes you,” he said.

“What’s its name?” she asked.

“Prince,” he said.

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Image credit; Dex Ezekiel Unsplash

36 thoughts on “What she saw…

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje March 6, 2023 / 13:46

    Definitely a princely puppy. Thanks Keith for joining in with this sweet story.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje March 6, 2023 / 14:31

        My pleasure

  2. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin March 6, 2023 / 17:36

    Adorable story. Excellent take on the prompt. Love the ambiguity…of it too.

  3. kenhume31's avatar kenhume31 March 6, 2023 / 17:55

    Nice; sweet slant on the prompt Keith! 👍😁👏👌

      • kenhume31's avatar kenhume31 March 9, 2023 / 17:07

        You’re welcome sir! 🙏👍😊

  4. beth's avatar beth March 6, 2023 / 20:26

    ❤️🐶

  5. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta March 6, 2023 / 22:14

    Oh Keith – you old romantic, such a sweet love story 🙂

  6. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough March 7, 2023 / 03:40

    Well, she didn’t specify… Still, Prince is really cute.

  7. Patricia's avatar Patricia March 7, 2023 / 03:56

    Aw, your soft sweet spot popped out with this story.

  8. Miss Andi's avatar Miss Andi March 7, 2023 / 20:43

    Better than a real prince! 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 9, 2023 / 17:06

      He could well be, I’m not surprised you think that!

  9. Maria Michaela's avatar Maria Michaela March 8, 2023 / 09:45

    Ha! Good one, Keith. Fitting name as well 🙂

  10. XmasDolly aka Marie's avatar XmasDolly aka Marie March 9, 2023 / 00:22

    Your Prince is absolutely gorgeous. We have a black lab most of the time, but in the sun he’s brown. Go figure! He’s a good dog, but he’s getting old… very sad! Why do we have to out live our pets? I wish they’d live as long as we do. 🙁 Have a good day!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings March 9, 2023 / 17:13

      I quite agree, it’s such a shame that dogs’ lives trot along 7 times faster than ours!

  11. Natasha's avatar Natasha March 10, 2023 / 10:35

    Cuteness overload.
    Mush, magic; and animal communication (will write about that some day)

    This tale was a breath of refreshing air, and that too on my anniversary weekend!😍😍

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