Romance!

For Friday Fictioneers

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Oh, sweetheart, look.

At what?

That bench, how romantic.

Graffiti, romantic?

No no no, it’s modernistic impressionism created by an inspired romanticist.

If you say so!

Come, my love, let me sit with you perched upon my lap. We can turn our backs on the hustle and bustle of the city and gaze at the vista before us.

It’s just a muddy patch covered in litter.

No no no, it’s a reminder of lives we once … erm … erm …

What’s the matter?

I’m sorry dearest, my flames of passion have been extinguished.

Why?

I seem to be sitting in a puddle.

0Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Roger Bultot for the picture.

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59 thoughts on “Romance!

  1. Sandra's avatar Sandra February 8, 2023 / 13:11

    I’m sure the flames can be easily rekindled. Once he’s dried out.

  2. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin February 8, 2023 / 14:04

    Reality “sits” in it at some point and, then off go the rose-colored blinders! Fabulous parable/story Keith.

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje February 8, 2023 / 14:13

    Poor lady! It would extinguish anyone’s passion

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje February 9, 2023 / 00:51

        😂😂😂

  4. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough February 8, 2023 / 14:25

    A creative new take on the old “look before you leap.” 🙂

  5. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon February 8, 2023 / 14:45

    Well, there are limits!

  6. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell February 8, 2023 / 15:52

    Haha! Well done on using that puddle. I love this. Great work Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 9, 2023 / 12:00

      It was the first thing I noticed, goodness knows how! Thanks, Mason.

      • Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell February 9, 2023 / 17:59

        It’s because you always notice the best bits within a photo prompt.

  7. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly February 8, 2023 / 18:15

    The weather has a habit of not playing along!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 9, 2023 / 12:05

      …or playing along its own mischievous way! Cheers, Iain.

  8. Patricia's avatar Patricia February 8, 2023 / 19:27

    Well, that would put a damper on romance.

  9. Michael's avatar Michael February 8, 2023 / 23:53

    Hopefully the puddle was only rain water. 😉

  10. beth's avatar beth February 9, 2023 / 01:21

    oops!

  11. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan February 9, 2023 / 08:17

    Nothing like a soggy bottom to dampen the spirits of spontaneous romance. Hilarious.

  12. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff February 9, 2023 / 12:48

    Dear Keith,

    Nothing like a wet tush to quell the passion. Fun stuff.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  13. dorahak's avatar dorahak February 9, 2023 / 17:31

    Nothing like a puddle to douse the, erm, erm, flames 🙂

  14. Bill's avatar Bill February 9, 2023 / 23:17

    The water is part of the artistic charm and romantic beauty. I hope these two can get on the same page soon. 🙂 Well done, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 10, 2023 / 10:27

      Perfectly put Bill. She should sit in the puddle too!

      • Bill's avatar Bill February 10, 2023 / 12:56

        Agree.

  15. Dale's avatar Dale February 10, 2023 / 03:35

    Now that put a damper on things!

      • Dale's avatar Dale February 10, 2023 / 13:41

        😀

  16. Justawriter's avatar Justawriter February 10, 2023 / 12:19

    Lol! This was hilarious. And great use of dialogue.

  17. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta February 10, 2023 / 16:53

    Haha, that cooled and dampened his ardour 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings February 10, 2023 / 17:51

      I nearly replied with something naughty, but that would never do in such polite company! Cheers, Angela.

      • poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta February 10, 2023 / 18:25

        🙂 You leave me in suspenders 🙂

  18. plaridel's avatar plaridel February 10, 2023 / 18:51

    it pays to look before you leap …er, sit. 🙂

  19. authorfleurl's avatar authorfleurl February 11, 2023 / 10:11

    LOL! Yes sitting in a puddle would dampen passion. Nicely done, Kieth

  20. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young February 12, 2023 / 16:32

    Such a romantic shouldn’t let a little damp put him off!

  21. creatingahome's avatar creatingahome February 13, 2023 / 09:52

    Oh dear!
    They are jumping up and down in muddy puddles.

  22. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli February 14, 2023 / 00:30

    Never even noticed the puddle! Another mismatch: a romanticist and a realist 🙁 Maybe she’ll laugh and he can begin again 🙂

  23. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner February 19, 2023 / 03:13

    Your story made me smile! Thanks for sharing.

  24. Heather Musk's avatar Heather Musk February 22, 2023 / 13:43

    I really enjoyed this, Keith. Thank you for sharing.

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