A few words

May 30, 2022Keith's Ramblings

for Sadje’s What Do You See? prompt

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Don’t speak

Words will only steal the moment

Your tears

the beating of my heart

say more than words this day

Be still

as my eyes feast upon your beauty

Your satin skin

your eyes your smile

is how I’ll remember you

Watch not

as I walk toward the setting sun

All I ask

is for a place in your heart

as you’ll always have in mine

‘

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Original image credit; Muhammed Hassan @ Unsplash

Sadje May 30, 2022 / 14:35

This is absolutely beautiful Keith. Loved it. Thanks for joining in my friend

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- Keith's Ramblings May 30, 2022 / 16:14
  
  Thanks, Sadje. Not my usual style, but fun to do nonetheless!
  
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  - Sadje May 30, 2022 / 16:22
    
    Yes, it’s something different this week but excellent
    
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pensitivity101 May 30, 2022 / 17:51

Loved this Keith.

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- Keith's Ramblings Jun 1, 2022 / 16:04
  
  I’m pleased, thanks, Di.
  
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  - pensitivity101 Jun 1, 2022 / 19:27
    
    You’re welcome
    
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Suzette Benjamin May 30, 2022 / 21:52

Really lovely piece Keith. Love what you did with the graphics.

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- Keith's Ramblings Jun 1, 2022 / 16:17
  
  Thanks so much, Suzette.
  
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  - Suzette Benjamin Jun 1, 2022 / 16:53
    
    My pleasure.
    
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messymimi's meanderings May 30, 2022 / 23:03

Touching and sad, excellently crafted.

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- Keith's Ramblings Jun 1, 2022 / 16:26
  
  That’s really kind of you Mimi, thank you.
  
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gdutta17 Jun 2, 2022 / 13:16

What a beautiful take. Loved it.

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- Keith's Ramblings Jun 3, 2022 / 15:31
  
  That’s so kind of you, thanks.
  
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