Time to rhyme …

for Friday Fictioneers

better-grade

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I know it’s here somewhere

but where tell me where?

When I finished last night

I left it right there.

 

Ten hours of scribbling

and scratching my head,

before I was happy 

and headed for bed.

 

My pen is still here,

my blotter, my ink.

But where is my poem?

I just cannot think.

 

Has it dropped to the floor,

is it under that book?

Is it tucked in those papers,

where else can I look?

 

There’s just one thing for it

this place is a mess.

Now is the time

To sort out my desk!

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desktop-promptThanks to Rochelle for hosting and providing the photograph.

*This is not a comment on your desk Rochelle, I promise!

 

Click Froggie to join in the fun!

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40 thoughts on “Time to rhyme …

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff May 18, 2022 / 12:44

    Dear Keith,

    Oh, you have captured me in verse. I’ve heard it said that those who are proud of keeping a tidy house will never know the joy of finding something they thought irretrievably lost. Love this poem.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 18, 2022 / 13:43

      Thanks, Rochelle. I’ve always wanted an excuse, thanks to you I now have one!

  2. Natasha's avatar Natasha May 18, 2022 / 13:26

    What a beautiful mess✨🤗

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 18, 2022 / 14:03

      There’s beauty in everything, at least that’s what I tell myself!

      • Natasha's avatar Natasha May 18, 2022 / 18:48

        I couldn’t agree more. Even in the mess and our messy being 😊

  3. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough May 18, 2022 / 14:46

    Oh, do I know! You’ll have to be like me and pile all loose papers in a tub labelled “Someday.” That’s ORDER chez moi. 😉

  4. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly May 18, 2022 / 15:54

    Wonderful. It feels like the desk tidying has been put off for too long! 🙂

  5. creatingahome's avatar creatingahome May 18, 2022 / 17:25

    Hehehehe!
    Out with the boxes and feather duster.

  6. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 May 18, 2022 / 17:57

    A tidy desk is the sign of a dull mind.
    Do you believe that?
    No, me neither…
    I bet your poem’s gone down the back of the desk amongst all the cables!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 19, 2022 / 12:16

      That’s my excuse, even though I don’t actually believe it, and don’t start me on cables!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 19, 2022 / 12:25

      You’re ace at that, I know! Are you free tomorrow?

  7. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli May 18, 2022 / 22:46

    Ah, a Seussian Treasure Hunt. Enjoyable read, Keith.

  8. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan May 19, 2022 / 09:09

    Whimsical and entertainment at its best. Loved it. I believe the stairs in my house are connected to some time warp. I can’t remember why I went upstairs or even how I got there!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 19, 2022 / 12:49

      Thanks, James. If I had stairs I’m sure I’d have the same problem, thank goodness I have a flat!

  9. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner May 19, 2022 / 10:09

    I so love this, wonderful. Whenever I clean up the mess on my desk, I never find anything afterwards. My chaos has method.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 19, 2022 / 13:02

      Thanks so much. That happens so often to me too. I know I put it somewhere, but where?

  10. plaridel's avatar plaridel May 19, 2022 / 16:25

    sometimes when you’re looking for something, it could just be staring in your face. nice take on the prompt. 🙂

  11. Bill's avatar Bill May 19, 2022 / 16:55

    You’ve organized such a creative and wonderful poem out of that chaotic prompt. Well done, dear, imaginative, Keith. 🙂

  12. Inside the Mind of Isadora's avatar Inside the Mind of Isadora May 19, 2022 / 19:48

    I can sympathize with the mad chaos.
    Chaos Beware … there will be a cleaning crew, just not today.
    Good one, Keith.

  13. Michael's avatar Michael May 19, 2022 / 21:17

    Gaining clutter, is such fun, ( now where are my glasses )

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 20, 2022 / 15:02

      Funny you should say that, I have 3 pairs dotted around so I always have one in view when needed!

  14. Margaret's avatar Margaret May 20, 2022 / 00:50

    What a fun response to the photo. I love it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 20, 2022 / 15:03

      Thanks Margaret, not my normal style but it was fun to do!

  15. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta May 20, 2022 / 12:23

    Great rhyme and when I read it I thought it was me!!

  16. granonine's avatar granonine May 21, 2022 / 14:23

    Wonderful, Keith. It put me in mind of Dr. Seuss 🙂

  17. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell May 23, 2022 / 21:37

    Hahaha oh my gosh, sounds like my handbag haha I can never find anything in it. Well done. Great poem

  18. oneta hayes's avatar oneta hayes May 25, 2022 / 01:04

    Style and content especially pleasing to me.

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