for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Saunter and the limit, 51 words
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He sauntered towards me. Looked dodgy, hoodie, sunglasses.
Got it, he whispered.
Pardon?
The gear.
Gear?
Shtuff, ya’ know. Give us the cash and it’s yoursh.
Stuff?
Keep ya’ voish down.
What are you on about?
You’re Bernito ‘Bruiser’ Bershcoloni aincha?
No. I’m Keith.
Oh, sorry mate, he said, sauntering away.
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Now you’ll never know what you could have bought!
I’m pretty sure it’s something I shouldn’t!
Good one!
Thanks, Reena!
Saunter away indeed. Well done, Keith.
Have a fabulous weekend. 🙂
Thank goodness! Cheers, Sandee.
Haha! Should have listened more of this enticing offer.
Maybe I could have become a drug-lord! On second thoughts…!
Yeah! A missed opportunity.
Saunter away quickly, these kind don’t want to be identifued!
If he hadn’t, I would have done!
🙂 Great little story, Keith! Not only a great amount of fun to read, but to listen to and visualize.
I’m really pleased you liked it, Michael, thanks so much.
Always a pleasure to experience your humorous stories. This one doesn’t disappoint! LOL
Your kind words make it all worthwhile, thanks Susan
A doppleganger perhaps?
Fun take.
I hadn’t thought about that, I wonder!
Whew … you go outta that situation with some slick, didn’t ya? Seen that undercover cop peeking through a hole in his newspaper, did ya, eh, Bernito …? 😉
No officer, it’s a case of mistaken identity, honest!
Yep. Ha! 😉
Even the scoundrels are polite. “Oh, sorry mate, he said, sauntering away.” Wonderfully entertaining read, Keith. 🙂
Chuffed you enjoyed it, Bill!
Ha ha ha!! Love this little tale, Keith! Or should I say ‘Bruiser’! Clearly there’s a naughty version of you wandering around! Even though that’s already impossible 🙂
Me? Naughty? You have no idea Sunra!
Laughing out loud literally! (And now I am wondering what the shtuff was 😉)
So am I, perhaps I should have taken it! Delighted to have amused you, thanks so much.
Lol I really like this; storytelling through dialogue is one of my favorites 💖
Thank you so much. It’s very useful when you have such a tight word limit!
You nailed it ❣️
Nice of you to say so! Cheers!
Okay dear 🥰
Haha! You never fail!
You say the nicest things Dale, thank you!
That’s coz you are the nicest guy, Keith!
Awww, muah!
Mwah! right back 🙂