Sixty nine words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Temerity and the limit, 69 words.

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“Mirror mirror on the wall who’s … ”

It suddenly had the temerity to steam up and crash to the floor!

“How dare you! Right, I’m dieting. Soon I will be the fairest of them all.”

It didn’t last, so she sought out a mirror like those you find in the Hall of Mirrors that change your shape.

It behaved itself, stayed put and made her look … well, quite good actually! 

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27 thoughts on “Sixty nine words

  1. Bill's avatar Bill January 8, 2022 / 16:11

    Nice one, Keith. Self deception: the solution to all our woes. Right?

      • Bill's avatar Bill January 8, 2022 / 18:17

        🙂

  2. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 January 8, 2022 / 16:30

    Liked this Keith. Shadows on the ground make me look thinner too. LOL

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje January 8, 2022 / 17:32

    Haha! Thanks for the smiles

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje January 9, 2022 / 16:47

        🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

  4. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda January 8, 2022 / 21:38

    Mirrors ought to know their place … 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 9, 2022 / 16:36

      They need to reflect on their purpose in others’ lives!

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda January 9, 2022 / 17:45

        LOL!!!! 🙂 yep, them do!

  5. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb January 9, 2022 / 09:38

    Well done Keith – those mirrors made going to the circus or arcades great fun …probably back in the day! Fun take on the word ‘temerity’ – cheers Hilary

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 9, 2022 / 16:49

      They were fun, I wonder if they’re still around! Thanks, Hilary.

  6. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb January 9, 2022 / 17:08

    I’m not going looking for them!! Cheers – Hilary

  7. marialberg's avatar marialberg January 9, 2022 / 17:46

    A magic mirror’s temerity: Nice!

  8. Stine Writing's avatar Stine Writing January 9, 2022 / 21:23

    Hahaha! I need one of the mirrors you walk through into some magic world! Ah, fairytales!

  9. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz January 9, 2022 / 22:48

    Ha ha ha! A clever little story, Keith 🙂

  10. Dale's avatar Dale January 10, 2022 / 12:41

    How dare it, indeed! It’s not what we look at, it’s what we see 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 10, 2022 / 13:28

      I know, the cheek of it! Mirrors always lie anyway, they show you the wrong way round.

      • Dale's avatar Dale January 10, 2022 / 14:30

        I know. They are so very cheeky. And unreliable, at best…

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