Eighty four words

For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Question and the limit, 84 words

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I can’t explain what happened that night, it was surreal.

I heard a voice.  It was answering questions I should have asked but never dared to.  Either I’d feared the answer or simply couldn’t face knowing the truth. 

In those few moments, like it or not, I learned much about the perplexities and quandaries buried deep within me. 

It stopped.  I closed my eyes.  I swear I heard laughter, suggesting not everything I’d been told was necessarily the truth.

And so, the questions remain.

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25 thoughts on “Eighty four words

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje October 23, 2021 / 16:50

    A profound post Keith.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje October 23, 2021 / 17:22

        🙏🏼👍🏼

  2. Dora's avatar Dora October 23, 2021 / 20:22

    Keith,
    As usual, the graphic complements your post wonderfully. It’s the nature of visions or oracles, isn’t it, to be ambiguous. Love your use of the prompt in this way.
    pax,
    dora

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 24, 2021 / 13:35

      Indeed it is Dora, ambiguous and thought-provoking. Thank you so much for your kind words. it makes it all worthwhile!

      • Dora's avatar Dora October 24, 2021 / 19:50

        My pleasure!

  3. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough October 23, 2021 / 21:50

    Now you’ll never know! As Charlie Brown would say. “Rats.”

  4. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda October 23, 2021 / 23:34

    And so, remain they do … but are still good to ask. I think …

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 24, 2021 / 13:52

      I think so too, but I’m not entirely sure! Cheers, Na’ama.

  5. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner October 24, 2021 / 11:41

    Asking the questions is always good, but I think everyone must answer for themsleves. Great piece, Keith.

  6. Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz October 24, 2021 / 14:12

    Ooh, very cryptic, Keith! I was waiting for the punchline then realised we were on another plane today. I want to know what happens next. Great response 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 24, 2021 / 14:25

      Nothing beats a bit of crypticism now and again! I’d like to know too, if the voice returns I let you know!

      • Sunra Rainz's avatar Sunra Rainz October 24, 2021 / 23:00

        Ha ha! Please do 🙂

  7. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta October 24, 2021 / 14:56

    Love it and the imagery – perfect

  8. Bill's avatar Bill October 24, 2021 / 18:11

    “I want answers, and I demand the answers I want.”
    Excellent one, Keith. Deep but real. 🙂

      • Bill's avatar Bill October 25, 2021 / 21:32

        Of course, Keith.

  9. notestowomen's avatar notestowomen October 24, 2021 / 18:52

    Good one, Keith. It was nice hearing you read it.

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