My six

for Six Sentence Stories where the given word is Treatment.


She’s been very good to me just lately so I thought she deserved some special treatment and knowing how much she likes luxuriating in a mountain of sumptuous bubbles  I splashed out on some very expensive bath lotion. Okay, it was half price in a sale but she didn’t need to know that!

I popped upstairs to find out how she was enjoying it, and as I entered the bathroom she was climbing out of the tub and there she stood with a big smile on her face, all pink and shiny and she looked so sweet I just had to give her hot little body a cuddle.

I gave her a squeeze and she suddenly shot up from my arms and hit her head on the ceiling; actually, I’m joking but she was extremely slippery!

As for me, I think the ideal soak would be in a bath of red wine, just laying there in a cheeky little Chateau  Branleur with a hint of blackberries and plum, and an aroma reminiscent of balmy summer nights in Bordeaux, although it might be more like marinating than bathing, and I’d probably emerge looking like a chunk of coq-au-vin!

In the meantime, I’ll make do with my usual squirt and a half of citrus washing-up liquid, and pretend it’s gin and lime!



Thanks to GirlieOnTheEdge for hosting.




30 thoughts on “My six

  1. Doug Jacquier Oct 21, 2021 / 19:58

    Fun idea, Keith. Not sure about the effect on red wine of body sweat, exfoliation and other bathtime ‘accidents’. 😉

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  2. clark Oct 21, 2021 / 21:46

    What an …exhuberant Six!
    Not sure that is the correct word for a story that is not only fun to read, imagery abounding, but to hear.
    Very cool

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 22, 2021 / 12:42

      I’m not sure either but I’ll gratefully accept it in the generous way it was intended! Thank you.


  3. pensitivity101 Oct 21, 2021 / 21:48

    Ha! I remember using a particular washing up liquid as shampoo because it smelt nice.It stripped my hair of all its natural oils and took months to get the shine back!

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  4. Pat Brockett Oct 21, 2021 / 23:57

    So fun to read and to listen to your Six Sentence Stories! Your imagination is endless.

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  5. hilarymb Oct 22, 2021 / 10:38

    Hi Keith – way too early … but bathtime time heaven … no thank you – rather the bottle and the olives after a luxuriating bath – overlooking the sea and setting sun. Cheers – Hilary

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