A hundred words …

for Friday Fictioneers.

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Gerald and his devoted wife Maisy spent a lifetime producing intricate pieces of furniture. Gerald crafting timber, Maisy, fashioning upholstery.

Hardly a house in the village lacked one of their elegant creations. 

In time their once nimble hands weakened. A lifetime of polishing and stitching had to end but not before making something special for themselves.

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The entire village turned out to bid them farewell. Their final creations, two satin-draped coffins graced the chapel.  Between them, Millicent, their daughter played her violin as the choir sang Gerald and Maisy’s favourite song…

If I were a carpenter

And you were a lady …

 

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20210628_173423Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Sandra Crook for the picture.

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66 thoughts on “A hundred words …

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje July 7, 2021 / 13:43

    A beautiful story Keith

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje July 7, 2021 / 15:52

        You’re welcome Keith

  2. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff July 7, 2021 / 13:47

    Dear Keith,

    Such a touching story. Of course, the song is running through my head with gleeful abandon. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 7, 2021 / 15:11

      Mine too Rochelle, it has been all day! Thanks so much.

  3. Indira's avatar Indira July 7, 2021 / 13:50

    Beautiful.Very touching.

  4. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell July 7, 2021 / 14:06

    What a beautiful tale. Well done, Keith.

  5. earthskyair's avatar earthskyair July 7, 2021 / 14:16

    Awww! Wonderfully told, sweet!🌷

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 7, 2021 / 15:47

      Thanks so much, Christine, I like to take the less obvious route when I can!

  6. Dale's avatar Dale July 7, 2021 / 18:38

    You are such a romantic! This is absolutely lovely, Keith.

      • Dale's avatar Dale July 9, 2021 / 12:14

        I say what I mean 🙂

  7. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli July 7, 2021 / 18:48

    What a beautiful relationship they shared with each other and their community. A dream come true. Neat accompanying graphics!

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli July 9, 2021 / 15:36

        You’re welcome.

  8. Gail M Baugniet's avatar Gail M Baugniet July 7, 2021 / 23:24

    Very much a loving reminder of my parents, Keith. Thanks for the memories.

  9. Tannille's avatar Tannille July 8, 2021 / 05:44

    Almost like their talent came full circle. Shame to bury such craftsmanship.

  10. draliman's avatar draliman July 8, 2021 / 07:57

    A sweet tale, but a bit chilling thinking of them crafting their own coffins… 😮

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 9, 2021 / 12:02

      To you and me, it is, but for them it was the natural thing to do. Cheers Ali.

  11. Sandra's avatar Sandra July 8, 2021 / 11:00

    Make your own coffin sounds so much more worthy than planning your order of service and the hymns and flowers.

  12. Elizabeth Young's avatar Elizabeth Young July 8, 2021 / 15:59

    Guess they didn’t trust anyone else to make their coffins!

  13. plaridel's avatar plaridel July 8, 2021 / 17:35

    a life well-lived for both of them and an appreciative village to boot.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 9, 2021 / 11:41

      That’s exactly as I imagined them. Thanks so much plaridel.

  14. Bear's avatar Bear July 8, 2021 / 20:34

    What a beautiful story… now I have “Hey, Jude” mixed with “Beautiful Lady” scrambling my already fried brain.

  15. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan July 8, 2021 / 20:44

    Well if you have to go, then might as well go off in style. I am sure people were asking were they could get one just like those.

    • James McEwan's avatar James McEwan July 8, 2021 / 20:45

      Where they could get one of those beautiful coffins. (correct to my last).

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 9, 2021 / 11:26

        I’m sure they were James. Cheers.

  16. Sheena's avatar Sheena July 9, 2021 / 08:45

    This is so sweet and sad. Lovely.

  17. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 July 9, 2021 / 17:40

    How lucky they were to die at the same time…
    This is a very imaginative take on the prompt, Keith. I like it.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 11, 2021 / 17:46

      Indeed they were. Thanks for you generous words Penny.

  18. granonine's avatar granonine July 9, 2021 / 18:16

    Creative way to use the prompt and the song. Impressive, Keith.

  19. Michael's avatar Michael July 10, 2021 / 00:00

    A story to warm my heart,,

  20. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda July 10, 2021 / 01:32

    Hurray for a life well-lived and a story well crafted … 😉

  21. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner July 10, 2021 / 14:58

    Aw, what a bitter-sweet tale. And thank you for planting that song in my head… 🙂

  22. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug July 11, 2021 / 03:30

    That was a lovely tale. Dying together has to make it much easier on both.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings July 11, 2021 / 17:03

      It’s something I’m sure many would wish for. Thanks Nobbin.

  23. writerravenclaw's avatar writerravenclaw July 28, 2021 / 15:50

    An endearing story, they were together to the end. Well done.

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