A tiny tale …

for Friday Fictioneers

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Millie and Billy are best friends and love playing together. They are fearless too. Billy likes spinning around until he’s dizzy and Millie once ate a sprout! Yuc!

Yesterday they played creepy-crawly-dare. Billy dared Millie to pick up a wiggly worm and Millie dared Billy to prod a grasshopper. She let a caterpillar walk up her arm, and he sat a slimy slug on his nose!

Millie told Billy to shut his eyes and open his hand. She put a hairy spider in his palm then told him to look. Billy screamed and ran away. It seems he’s not so fearless after all!

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m.-rostThanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Miles Rost for the photo.

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65 thoughts on “A tiny tale …

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 26, 2021 / 14:10

    Hmm…. I think they did pretty well. Great story Keith

  2. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell May 26, 2021 / 14:39

    Love it. All the fun of the kids and the creepy crawlies brings back great memories. Well done, Keith.

  3. Michael's avatar Michael May 26, 2021 / 15:56

    I do hope that the spider survived, … And that Billy is not scarred for life…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 26, 2021 / 16:58

      Spiders seem to manage to look after themselves pretty well, at least they do in my home! I’m sure Billy’s okay Michael. Cheers.

  4. Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh May 26, 2021 / 16:54

    I don’t blame Billy at all! I would have ran away too. Spiders are the limit! Good one, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 26, 2021 / 17:00

      Don’t you like being tickled by a spider? They’re so cute! Thanks, Shweta.

      • Shweta Suresh's avatar Shweta Suresh May 26, 2021 / 23:21

        Not even in my dreams 🤣🤣🤣
        I can never quite get their appeal. They just look like monsters to me.
        You’re very welcome, Keith

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 27, 2021 / 09:27

      One day they’ll be telling this story to their grandchildren! Thanks, Larry.

  5. granonine's avatar granonine May 26, 2021 / 20:19

    Great fun, Keith. A microcosm of innocent childhood.

  6. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff May 26, 2021 / 20:58

    Dear Keith,

    Millie and Billy sound like kids who can entertain themselves for hours on end. Adorable story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 27, 2021 / 09:38

      That’s exactly how I saw them! Thanks so much, Rochelle.

  7. jenne49's avatar jenne49 May 26, 2021 / 21:46

    What a fun story. And so accurate in its depiction of kids and creepy crawlies! I bought a card yesterday that said, ‘A person who says ‘Out of sight, out of mind’ has obviously never lost a spider in the bedroom! I guess Billy would agree.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 27, 2021 / 09:47

      That’s such a great saying and very true! Thanks, Jenne.

  8. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda May 26, 2021 / 22:20

    I think I know them … down to the hairy-spider screams … 😉

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda May 27, 2021 / 14:24

        I don’t mind the REGULAR spiders, but the hairy big ones are … well … not so much … And then there is my sister, who’s liable to have a panic attack at the very mere mention of one … 😉

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda May 27, 2021 / 16:35

        Yep. Webby serious! 😉

  9. plaridel's avatar plaridel May 27, 2021 / 00:40

    hmmm… i wonder what he’ll do for a comeback. she better watch out. 🙂

  10. GHLearner's avatar GHLearner May 27, 2021 / 13:30

    Such fun! I’d have screamed, too, and I learned to like spiders. These two feel very real. Brings up memories…

  11. draliman's avatar draliman May 27, 2021 / 14:25

    To be fair that would make me scream and run away too… 🙂

      • susanrouchard's avatar susanrouchard May 28, 2021 / 15:33

        Thanks Keith for this creepy crawly nursery rhyme. Nature, beauty, beats them all. Happy Friday Fictioneers.

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 30, 2021 / 18:02

        Thanks for your lovely comment Susan

  12. The Abject Muse's avatar The Abject Muse May 27, 2021 / 16:40

    What a cute story! Nicely done. I think Billy’s reaction was normal. Anything else would’ve been on the strange side. 🙂

  13. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan May 27, 2021 / 20:33

    A lovely story about for children with a reminder that even boys can be afraid of the little things. His sister, Milly is certainly not made of sugar and spice.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 29, 2021 / 11:58

      I’m sure she has a few things nice! Thanks so much, James.

  14. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 May 27, 2021 / 22:01

    Lovely story, Keith. You caught the dynamic between the children perfectly. Delightful, gentle humour.

  15. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug May 28, 2021 / 05:05

    Millie and Billy seem quite silly.

  16. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell May 28, 2021 / 05:08

    I would scream and run away too!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 29, 2021 / 11:52

      You as well Laurie? There’s quite a stampede taking place!

  17. Bear's avatar Bear May 28, 2021 / 14:01

    That brought a smile. I’d laugh, but it would hurt too much.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 29, 2021 / 11:52

      I wouldn’t wish to cause pain, a smile is more than enough! Thanks, Bear.

  18. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli May 28, 2021 / 23:22

    They are the best kind of playmates, having innocent fun and exploring their world together. Fun illustrations also.

  19. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts May 29, 2021 / 04:40

    Creepy crawlies brings back funny memories growing up with two only slightly older brothers. A very fun story!

  20. Marja's avatar Marja May 29, 2021 / 07:28

    Goodness gracious who isn’t scared of a hairy spider Great story

  21. Mae Heller's avatar Mae Heller May 29, 2021 / 15:17

    Women are often the more hardy ones LOL

  22. subroto's avatar subroto May 30, 2021 / 11:34

    Aargh! I’d run away too. Fun story.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings May 30, 2021 / 17:30

      I’m beginning to think it might be fun to be a spider in the next life! Cheers, subroto.

  23. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max May 30, 2021 / 20:17

    I remember enjoying feeling scared of creepy crawlies ! I do like spiders.

  24. Dora's avatar Dora May 31, 2021 / 23:52

    Keith,

    Yikes! I’d run away too! I love the way you told this story from a child’s perspective when “daring” one’s playmates and grossing one another other out was somehow the height of happiness! Not to mention scaring each other silly.

    ~🕊Dora

  25. Patricia Clair's avatar Patricia Clair June 1, 2021 / 16:44

    Oh yes – the dares of childhood! I would avoid these games at all costs, as my “limit” was pretty short. 😉

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