Sixty words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Wanton and the limit, 60 words.

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I’m Blake. PI. Mission? Follow male suspected of affair with wanton female.  

     16.27. Linton Road. Suspect leaves home.

     16.47. Bloom Street. Suspect enters florist.

     16.52. Exits with flowers.

     17.03. Suspect enters Juniper Avenue.

Coincidence. I live in Juniper Avenue. 

     17.09. Suspect knocks door of 27.

What? I live at 27.

     17.11. Female opens door.

      17.12. Couple embrace.

That’s my wife!

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20 thoughts on “Sixty words

  1. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough May 15, 2021 / 14:44

    Well done. Poor PI. A new twist to the “eavesdroppers hear no good about themselves” idea. 🙂

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje May 15, 2021 / 17:17

    Clever idea for story.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje May 15, 2021 / 17:26

        You’re welcome 😉

  3. Jen Goldie's avatar Jen Goldie May 15, 2021 / 19:52

    Is that egg on face or something like that.
    Good One Keith! 🙂

  4. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff May 15, 2021 / 20:22

    Dear Keith,

    18:30 – what did she fix her private eye husband for supper? I’m sure he has a dish for her. Well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  5. Dale's avatar Dale May 16, 2021 / 04:18

    Uh oh!!

  6. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb May 16, 2021 / 08:51

    Hi Keith – clever take … fun to think about – no! Cheers Hilary

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