Sixty words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Wanton and the limit, 60 words.




I’m Blake. PI. Mission? Follow male suspected of affair with wanton female.  

     16.27. Linton Road. Suspect leaves home.

     16.47. Bloom Street. Suspect enters florist.

     16.52. Exits with flowers.

     17.03. Suspect enters Juniper Avenue.

Coincidence. I live in Juniper Avenue. 

     17.09. Suspect knocks door of 27.

What? I live at 27.

     17.11. Female opens door.

      17.12. Couple embrace.

That’s my wife!





20 thoughts on “Sixty words

  1. rochellewisoff May 15, 2021 / 20:22

    Dear Keith,

    18:30 – what did she fix her private eye husband for supper? I’m sure he has a dish for her. Well done.



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  2. hilarymb May 16, 2021 / 08:51

    Hi Keith – clever take … fun to think about – no! Cheers Hilary

    Liked by 1 person

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