22 thoughts on “Thirty-one words

  1. PaperKutzs Jan 2, 2021 / 11:56

    interesting take, you always have a different way to view things which is always interesting

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  2. hilarymb Jan 2, 2021 / 13:36

    Well done Keith – big mistake for the marginalised guy … clever interpretation … all the best – Hilary

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  3. Dora Jan 2, 2021 / 14:58

    Aw, shucks! I wish he hadn’t fouled up. Exceedingly apt graphic to boot 🙂

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  4. rochellewisoff Jan 2, 2021 / 15:06

    Dear Keith,

    What you do with the graphic is every bit as entertaining as your words. I’d say your MC used marginal judgement. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • Keith's Ramblings Jan 3, 2021 / 11:19

      Thanks, Rochelle, the graphics usually take more time and thought than the story! As far as he’s concerned, you’re probably right!

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  5. Dale Jan 3, 2021 / 02:24

    IT never pays in the end, does it?
    Well done, Sir!

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  6. Prior... Jan 3, 2021 / 02:45

    Love how the outside looking in and success bookmarked with the closing looking out and all the in between – felt like more than 31 words

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      • Prior... Jan 3, 2021 / 17:17

        you make it look so easy – but because I have done my own flash fiction (on and off) I think i can now really appreciate the skill that goes into such well-done short pieces

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