A handful of words …

for Friday Fictioneers

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Simon’s a bit of a poet. Syme the Rhyme we call him. When I mentioned our beer was cloudy, off he went!

“There’s another world above the clouds

An unspoilt world untouched by man”.

“Simon, should I get Sinead the Barmaid to change them?” 

“A world where nothing hides the sun.

A world where time has not begun”.

“Syme, shall I…”

“A world which knows not needless strife

Untainted by the yearns of life”.

“ Simon, beer, cloudy!”

“It’s miles above our troubled land

Unspoilt by greed and human hand”.

He stopped and lifted his glass. 

“Do you think this beer’s a bit cloudy?” he asked.

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Tnaama-clouds-and-building.hanks to Rochelle for hosting and to Na’ama Yehuda for the photo.

Toast the frogs to join in the fun!

 

 

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49 thoughts on “A handful of words …

  1. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond December 30, 2020 / 13:26

    I also have a friend who talks but doesn’t listen.

  2. neilmacdon's avatar neilmacdon December 30, 2020 / 13:40

    Syme’s not completely in a world of his own then

  3. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff December 30, 2020 / 14:07

    Dear Keith,

    Twould seem that Syme the Rhyme has no time to listen. You made me laugh.

    Shalom and Happy New Year,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 30, 2020 / 14:14

      Thanks Rochelle and a Happy New Year to you too!

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje December 30, 2020 / 14:20

    Lol! Always something entertaining from you 👍👍👍😜

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje December 30, 2020 / 15:57

        My pleasure

  5. ceayr's avatar ceayr December 30, 2020 / 14:43

    Have you tried a large wet fish across his gub?
    That sometimes attracts the attention.
    Socially distanced chuckles.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 30, 2020 / 15:10

      Interesting angle. Unfortunately, I didn’t have one to hand!

  6. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough December 30, 2020 / 15:10

    Well, hey, it’s not such a bad poem. He should write it down before he forgets. I gather a few beer can mess with the memory.
    Happy New Year! What rhymes with shloshed?

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 30, 2020 / 15:13

      Actually, I wrote the poem first thinking I’d do something different this week – then I slipped back into my old ways! Happy New Year to you too – I’ll ask Simon for help with that one!

  7. Dora's avatar Dora December 30, 2020 / 20:20

    LOL. Being in the throes of the poetic muse means never having to say you’re sorry. (Happy New Year, Keith! Hope all your mugs of beer stay unclouded.)

  8. bearmkwa's avatar bearmkwa December 30, 2020 / 20:28

    Great one! Happy New Year, Keith!

  9. J.A. Prentice's avatar J.A. Prentice December 30, 2020 / 20:44

    Love the contrast between the very grounded, human dialogue and the heightened language of the poem.

  10. pennygadd51's avatar pennygadd51 December 30, 2020 / 21:23

    Teehee! Syme the Rhyme sounds like a good person to have a drink with – you’d never lack for interest, would you? He’s a great comic creation, Keith, and I hope we hear more from him!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 31, 2020 / 11:40

      He could do with an on/off switch sometimes! I’ve a feeling he’ll be back.

  11. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli December 31, 2020 / 00:25

    Syme’s head is in the clouds so how could he tell at first? Fun story. Happy Holidays!

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli December 31, 2020 / 20:03

        Thanks, Keith!

  12. granonine's avatar granonine December 31, 2020 / 02:14

    Sounds as if Simon lives in clouds.

    Happy New Year to you, Keith 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings December 31, 2020 / 11:32

      That about sums him up! Happy New Year to you too Linda.

  13. liz young's avatar liz young December 31, 2020 / 11:06

    Gotta love a poet!

  14. draliman's avatar draliman December 31, 2020 / 16:07

    Ha, he may wax lyrical but he got the point in the end 🙂 Good poem!

  15. plaridel's avatar plaridel December 31, 2020 / 18:11

    didn’t he have a lot to drink yet? 🙂

  16. Girl in Niagara's avatar Girl in Niagara December 31, 2020 / 21:06

    Haha good one Keith. It’s all about communication or he had a few beers already. Good one!

  17. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan January 1, 2021 / 13:35

    Wishing you a happy and wonderful New Year 2021.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 1, 2021 / 17:18

      That’s very kind of you, the same to you James.

  18. Dale's avatar Dale January 1, 2021 / 20:37

    While he’s not listening to his chums, those rhymes are rather lovely…
    Happy 2021, Keith!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings January 2, 2021 / 13:29

      Thanks Dale. One day I might write a few poems again! Have a Happy One too Dale!

      • Dale's avatar Dale January 2, 2021 / 15:53

        I think you should, Keith. They are lovely.
        Thanks!

  19. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell January 5, 2021 / 09:52

    Ha! I love Syme’s spirit

  20. rogershipp's avatar rogershipp January 5, 2021 / 16:32

    I also have a friend you in a constant ‘noise’ but never takes the time to listen to what he is saying. Enjoyed!

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