Forty-eight words

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Histrionics and the limit, 48 words.

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Rupert’s histrionic demeanour suited him perfectly for the role of King Henry V. He looked splendid in his suit of armour, Shakespeare would have been impressed.

He gazed skyward, raised his lance and strode forward.

“Once more unto the breach…” he yelled as he toppled off the stage.

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29 thoughts on “Forty-eight words

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff October 31, 2020 / 12:38

    Dear Keith,

    I’m sure all who were present will remember Rupert’s grand performance. 😀

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje October 31, 2020 / 12:40

    Oh poor guy! Great story

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje October 31, 2020 / 16:06

        You’re welcome Keith

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 31, 2020 / 15:17

      As a stage costume I doubt it was even a real one!

  3. Ramya Vivek's avatar Ramya Vivek October 31, 2020 / 15:34

    Good story, Keith. Loved this.

  4. hilarymb's avatar hilarymb October 31, 2020 / 16:23

    Hi Keith – well I guess it’d be a painted costume … sad … much more fun to hear the clunk of the armour hitting the deck. A good histrionic take on the prompt – take care and don’t get blown away as October turns to November … Hilary

  5. Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 31, 2020 / 16:33

    I’m sure he’d rather it had been a real one after that tumble! Hold on tight, it sure is an unsettled outlook in more ways than one. Cheers, Hilary.

  6. ceayr's avatar ceayr November 1, 2020 / 10:31

    Could have been worse, could have been Richard III, he would have a horse on top of him!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 1, 2020 / 12:58

      I was the rear end of a horse on stage once. Just thought I’d mention it!

  7. Dora's avatar Dora November 1, 2020 / 17:01

    Always a mistake looking skyward while striding forward! Maybe this is how that saying got started, you know, “break a leg”?

  8. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 1, 2020 / 17:18

    Ah, Rupert … how will get get UP in all that armor after clattering off the stage is something I am wondering about … 😉

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 3, 2020 / 17:29

        Yeah … need someone to pull him? 😉

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 3, 2020 / 19:21

        Um … I’m kind of a lightweight (in more way than one …) but … I can probably get a team organized … 😉

  9. Dale's avatar Dale November 1, 2020 / 20:06

    That’s ending the show with a bang!

  10. Nima Mohan's avatar Nima Mohan November 17, 2020 / 19:45

    I loved your story Keith…as always 😀

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