Seventy-six words…

for Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt where the given word is Longevity and the word count 76.

 

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A hundred years ago, a hundred acorns fell from a tree that had stood there for a hundred years before.

Soon after, a sturdy sapling reached for the sun, soaked up rain and resisted the wind.

In time, it became a tree. An oak tree.

Children climbed it, birds nested within its branches.

With hearts carved in its bark, couples declared their undying love.  

Others will doubtless do so for a hundred years to come.

 

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22 thoughts on “Seventy-six words…

  1. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough November 23, 2019 / 14:28

    A great example. Oak trees have the idea of longevity nailed.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 23, 2019 / 16:59

      Yep, we come and go they just hang on in there!

  2. Dale's avatar Dale November 23, 2019 / 16:56

    Excellent choice of subject for longevity, Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 23, 2019 / 17:01

      I thought of writing about me, but then I thought I might be tempting fate!

      • Dale's avatar Dale November 23, 2019 / 17:01

        Smart choice, I say.

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 24, 2019 / 10:03

        I don’t think I’d be able to stretch it out to 100 words anyway!

      • Dale's avatar Dale November 24, 2019 / 17:23

        🙂

  3. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 23, 2019 / 18:01

    So true.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje November 24, 2019 / 10:43

        You’re welcome Keith.

  4. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff November 23, 2019 / 20:43

    Dear Keith,

    Nicely done. 100 years and 100 acorns in 76 words. Bravo!

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  5. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 24, 2019 / 16:53

    This is SO satisfying!!! 🙂 Love it! (don’t love people carving into Oak trees, but tis’ what it is …)

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 24, 2019 / 17:36

      Thanks, Na’ama. Carving on oak trees has been around forever, but I do tend to agree with you.

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 24, 2019 / 18:03

        I know … and I still don’t think the Oak trees like it … 😉

  6. Paula Light's avatar Paula Light November 24, 2019 / 17:19

    Excellent, Keith 👍🏻

  7. Reena Saxena's avatar Reena Saxena November 24, 2019 / 17:36

    The pain it suffers for somebody else’s expression of love…

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