One hundred words…

 for Friday Fictioneers

 

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zzzzWhen my friend Rosey downsized to a smaller apartment, her vast collection of bits and pieces didn’t fit, so many of them ended up storage, or prison as she calls it!  She visits them now and again so they don’t feel unloved.

When she went the other day, most of the lights weren’t working.  As she felt her way past Cell 16 she had the fright of her life. Through the gloom, she thought she saw a huge gaping mouthful of ugly gappy teeth!

She screamed, and the lights flickered into life.  Then she giggled.  It was a piano!

Oh, Rosey!

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Thanks to Rochelle for hosting and to J Hardy Carroll for the picture.

Prod the frog (if you dare) to see other’s stories!

 

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66 thoughts on “One hundred words…

  1. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 20, 2019 / 14:13

    A prison so that they don’t get away.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje November 21, 2019 / 11:57

        Yup! You’re welcome Keith.

  2. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff November 20, 2019 / 14:25

    Dear Keith,

    Rosey’s a corker, isn’t she? Cute story and a very different frog this week.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2019 / 11:40

      She comes in very handy! If I’m stuck for a story I just think ‘Rosey’! Thanks Rochelle.

  3. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 November 20, 2019 / 14:41

    My nephew fed my Mum’s piano keyboard cake as he thought it was a huge mouth. Good fun tale Keith

  4. ceayr's avatar ceayr November 20, 2019 / 16:40

    As you say: Oh Rosey!

  5. granonine's avatar granonine November 20, 2019 / 17:15

    Good thing Rosey can laugh at herself 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2019 / 11:35

      She the queen of self-deprecation Thanks Linda!

  6. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly November 20, 2019 / 20:07

    We’ve been having a loft clearout this week, so I can relate to Rosey – so much good stuff boxed up and unloved, just don’t have the space for it all!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2019 / 11:51

      Done that and taken it all to a boot sale! Cheers Iain

  7. theministryofshrawleywalks's avatar theministryofshrawleywalks November 20, 2019 / 21:48

    Good piece, the piano is one of the fiercest of the instruments, second only to the zither

  8. Mike's avatar Mike November 20, 2019 / 23:19

    I loved this,

  9. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli November 21, 2019 / 00:16

    Darkness is a powerful ingredient for the imagination isn’t it. Good story, Keith.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli November 22, 2019 / 00:52

        You’re very welcome.

  10. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings November 21, 2019 / 01:43

    Some things do look scary in the dark that are fine when it’s light. Tell Rosey it’s okay to bring a flashlight or torch!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2019 / 11:31

      She’s got one on her phone but she doesn’t know how to switch it on!

  11. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 21, 2019 / 01:52

    Like I tell all my stuff: “Behave, or risk eviction or … worse yet … storage prison!” 😉
    To be fair, I don’t personally have a storage unit, but I know many who do, and for many of them it is indeed like condemning their possessions to a ‘prison sentence’ of usually predetermined (and often much extended later on) ‘stay’…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 21, 2019 / 10:55

      I had one for quite a while until I realised I was wasting money paying for a unit to store things I’d never have a use for again – so I gave them a pardon and an early release!

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda November 21, 2019 / 15:33

        Yay! Pardoned unused items so that others may give them new life! 🙂

  12. Tannille's avatar Tannille November 21, 2019 / 06:40

    I love Rosey, smiled when I clicked and it was another of her stories.

  13. Varad's avatar Varad November 21, 2019 / 09:08

    Bless that Rosie!

    Funny and playful take, Keith.

  14. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young November 21, 2019 / 13:14

    Haha! Your eyesight is better than mine to have picked out that detail!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 22, 2019 / 09:53

      I wouldn’t have seen it had I not enlarged it!

  15. Dale's avatar Dale November 21, 2019 / 16:15

    Thank goodness for Rosey!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 22, 2019 / 09:52

      She comes in very handy when I’m stuck for a story! Cheers Dale.

      • Dale's avatar Dale November 22, 2019 / 16:20

        I hear ya! I need my own Rosey!

  16. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts November 21, 2019 / 18:35

    Funny girl, that Rosey. There’s something seriously spooky about storage spaces!! =)

  17. plaridel's avatar plaridel November 21, 2019 / 22:35

    like they say, oh, what a relief it is. 🙂

  18. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan November 22, 2019 / 13:55

    I think I know Rosey or at least a few people like her. Comical and entertaining. Loved the story.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 22, 2019 / 14:09

      They are great – in small doses! Thanks James.

  19. draliman's avatar draliman November 22, 2019 / 13:57

    Better that than sitting down to the “piano” and getting eaten by a huge gaping mouthful of ugly gappy teeth 🙂

  20. Woman walking Max's avatar Woman walking Max November 22, 2019 / 15:14

    O Rosey, I can imagine how scarey looming shapes in the gloom can be. Glad the lights came on quickly.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 23, 2019 / 11:24

      Hoorah, I found your lovely comment! Somehow it ended up in the spam bucket. Thanks so much for your email which led me to seek you out!

  21. Girl in Niagara's avatar Girl in Niagara November 22, 2019 / 19:21

    Definitely an entertaining take on the photo prompt Keith. I like it!

  22. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti November 22, 2019 / 22:18

    It’s so nice that she personifies her stuff

  23. Inside the Mind of Isadora's avatar Inside the Mind of Isadora November 23, 2019 / 00:35

    I’m glad it was piano keys and not something a bit more scary.
    I enjoyed your take on the prompt, Keith. Have a great weekend.
    Isadora😎

  24. jaya1966's avatar jaya1966 November 24, 2019 / 11:47

    These sudden shocks that come out of the blue can be nerve wracking! Ha! Ha!

  25. mcswhispers's avatar mcswhispers November 24, 2019 / 17:41

    Lovely! I’m amazed how you spotted that detail in the photo!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 25, 2019 / 10:42

      There’s often something hidden in prompt pictures!

  26. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug November 24, 2019 / 19:08

    How our minds love to play tricks on us. I think we’ve all been there.

  27. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg) November 24, 2019 / 20:11

    But now instead of the fear i would be left with a sorrow of all the music left imprisoned.

  28. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller November 26, 2019 / 00:30

    That Rosey…I can really relate to her! 🙂

  29. Fatima Fakier's avatar Fatima Fakier November 26, 2019 / 10:35

    I’m surprised she had athe nerve to switch on the light, with the fright that she got. I love what you did with the frog image!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 27, 2019 / 16:40

      Oh, she’s daring! The frog looks better with the lights on too! Thanks Fatima.

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