Keith's Ramblings

32 thoughts on “Thirty-two words …”

1. Christine Goodnough Oct 5, 2019 / 14:29

   Well done in so few words! This seems a type of obsession, and pretty hard to cure after ten years.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:23

     It certainly must be. Thanks Christine.

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2. pensitivity101 Oct 5, 2019 / 15:07

   Waiting, forever in hope Keith.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:22

     She is. Thanks Di.

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     • pensitivity101 Oct 6, 2019 / 14:32

       🙂

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3. isaiah46ministries Oct 5, 2019 / 15:45

   So poignant. Hope springs eternal! Grief postponed. Lovely post.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:21

     Where there’s hope… Thanks so much.

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4. JoHawkTheWriter Oct 5, 2019 / 15:57

   Oh, so sad. Nicely done in so few words.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:20

     Very kind of you, thanks Jo

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5. hilarymb Oct 5, 2019 / 17:06

   Sad … so sad. Great depiction of her waiting …

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:20

     Thanks so much Hilary.

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6. Dale Oct 5, 2019 / 18:27

   So hard to let go.
   Beautifully done, Keith.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:19

     I imagine it must be. Cheers Dale.

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7. Na'ama Yehuda Oct 5, 2019 / 18:36

   Wow. So much in so few words.
   I could SEE her waiting.
   Well done!

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 14:16

     i delighted it had the desired effect! Thanks so much Na’ama.

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     • Na'ama Yehuda Oct 6, 2019 / 16:16

       🙂 You’re welcome! Yep, ’twas quite effective! 🙂

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8. messymimi's meanderings Oct 6, 2019 / 02:21

   A true story more often than we would like to think. They call it a “widow’s walk” for a reason.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 13:21

     They do indeed. Thanks Mimi.

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9. D. Avery @shiftnshake Oct 6, 2019 / 04:42

   Well done. Felt like a ghost story at first, but really just sad for her. Haunted by her hopes and memories.

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   • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 13:20

     Perfectly summed you, thank you.

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10. rochellewisoff Oct 6, 2019 / 12:53

    Dear Keith,

    “Brandy, you’re a fine girl, what a good wife you would be…” Love the touching story in 32 words. Haunting and poignant.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 6, 2019 / 13:19

      “But my life, my lover, my lady is the sea”. That’s so kind of you, thanks Rochelle

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11. ⁂ Oct 6, 2019 / 17:05

    Fantastic!

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 7, 2019 / 10:38

      Thanks so much.

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12. sarahsouthwest Oct 6, 2019 / 17:37

    The age old story… Deftly done in so few words.

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 7, 2019 / 10:37

      Very kind of you, thanks so much.

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13. the real cie Oct 6, 2019 / 23:26

    A beautifully haunting little tale. Nicely done!
    Thank you for visiting me at Horror Harridans Writing Sisterhood.

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 7, 2019 / 10:34

      Thanks so much.

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14. sammicoxwriter Oct 11, 2019 / 17:32

    So sad, so poignant and so haunting in only 32 words. Wonderfully done 🙂

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 12, 2019 / 11:20

      Thanks Sammi, it was quite a challenge!

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15. Ruby Manchanda Oct 11, 2019 / 18:09

    Deep

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    • Keith's Ramblings Oct 12, 2019 / 11:19

      Thanks for dropping by Ruby

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