A few words…

for Friday Fictioneers

 

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cartoon-scared-grandma-running-vector-image_csp49247571It was really windy.  My flower pots had blown over and Norman the Gnome was flat on his back.

Suddenly Gail’s gazebo hurtled past.  A couple of cars swerved to avoid it.  Gail was trotting along behind, swerving between the swerving cars.  It was like a scene from a cartoon!   Suddenly it took off and landed in a tree.

I had warned her.  ‘Gail,’ I said, ‘it’s going to be windy, take it down’.  Did she listen? 

Gail called the Fire Brigade.  They rescue cats from trees so why not tents?  But no, so I said I’d help her – when the wind dies down! 

 

 

demolished-purple-tentFriday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle and our picture prompt this week is by Jon Wayne Fields.

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81 thoughts on “A few words…”

  1. rochellewisoff's avatar rochellewisoff August 14, 2019 / 12:57

    Dear Keith,

    Oh my! The next thing you know they’ll land in Oz. Delightful story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    PS The frog’s adorable and I’m taking him captive. 😉

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 14, 2019 / 13:05

      Now that would take a strong wind! I’m sure Froggie will appreciate a change of scenery! Thanks Rochelle.

  2. Iain Kelly's avatar Iain Kelly August 14, 2019 / 14:06

    Usually it’s those big trampolines everyone has in their gardens now that come sailing by during a storm! I hope Gail has better luck when they get the tent back. Good work on the frog too 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 15, 2019 / 08:46

      Now you come to mention it, they do have a habit of bowling along in the wind! Cheers Iain.

  3. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond August 14, 2019 / 14:28

    Reminds me of a Fourth of July storm many years ago. A neighbor’s screen house was picked up by the wind and was sent flying into their metal fence. Both were ruined!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 15, 2019 / 08:45

      That’s a Forth they’ll never forget! Cheers Denise.

  4. Christine Goodnough's avatar Christine Goodnough August 14, 2019 / 15:15

    Well told. Perhaps when the wind dies down the gazebo will tumble down without help?
    Reminds me of the storm that took down our vynel car shelter. We had several days of steady wind, one day 90 kmph gusting to over 100 kmph.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 15, 2019 / 08:43

      Wow, that really is windy! Hard for a person to stand upright let alone a gazebo!

  5. Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda August 14, 2019 / 16:37

    I admit I come here for the Froggy almost as much as I come here for the story!
    🙂
    Both are fun!
    Love this. … I can almost see her trotting behind the wing-spanned gazebo … 😉

    Na’ama

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 15, 2019 / 08:42

      That’s very kind of you Na’ama, thanks so much.

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda August 15, 2019 / 15:39

        This week’s poor Froggy needs some ankle weights … 😉
        You really are a master of adapting the amphibian to all manner of ‘moods’ and circumstances. 🙂 I love it.
        Stories are good, too!
        🙂

      • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 09:43

        He does! Hopefully I’ll find where he’s landed in time for next week’s FF!

      • Na'ama Yehuda's avatar Na'ama Yehuda August 16, 2019 / 13:47

        🙂 I’ll be eagerly waiting to track his mood and well-being… 😉

  6. messymimi's meanderings's avatar messymimi's meanderings August 14, 2019 / 16:43

    Oh, dear, i hope there were no accidents because of it, and that she takes it down next time!

  7. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 August 14, 2019 / 16:49

    Love it, and love what you do to froggy every week!

  8. trentpmcd's avatar trentpmcd August 14, 2019 / 20:57

    Appropriate name for the windstorm…

  9. msjadeli's avatar msjadeli August 14, 2019 / 21:00

    Such a fun story, Keith. All’s well that ends well, and once the wind leaves, I’m sure it will.

      • msjadeli's avatar msjadeli August 15, 2019 / 18:11

        You are very welcome.

  10. DB McNicol's avatar DB McNicol August 14, 2019 / 23:56

    LOL! I saw the photo prompt but just swamped with other stuff and nothing really popped into mind. This was great!

  11. anuragbakhshi's avatar anuragbakhshi August 15, 2019 / 05:31

    Ha ha ha…she can always use her umbrella(or the froggy’s) to fly up to the tree (with the help of the gale), and rescue her gazebo herself 🙂

  12. Brenda's Thoughts's avatar Brenda's Thoughts August 15, 2019 / 05:52

    Very entertaining scene, and wise to wait until the wind dies down. Poor Norman!

  13. Tannille's avatar Tannille August 15, 2019 / 07:07

    And then said to her, “I told you so?”
    😀

  14. Abhijit Ray's avatar Abhijit Ray August 15, 2019 / 11:59

    A tough job, but someone has to do it.

  15. Anita's avatar Anita August 15, 2019 / 12:14

    Hope the rescue mission was a success.
    Wind has great power. Hope it brought it down from where it had taken it 🙂
    Have a great week!

  16. Dale's avatar Dale August 15, 2019 / 14:12

    They never listen, do they? How the heck did I miss your story, especially since you’re my direct neighbour on the squares!
    I don’t imagine the fire brigade would be happy at receiving this call so it is a good thing the narrator helped her out!
    You are a master with the froggy!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 09:50

      Sometimes things are so close you don’t see them! As for Froggie, I spend more time fiddling with him than I do writing my stories these days!

      • Dale's avatar Dale August 16, 2019 / 13:48

        I don’t doubt it!

  17. patriciaruthsusan's avatar patriciaruthsusan August 15, 2019 / 14:15

    Ah, ha, ha. I love the alliteration of Norman the Gnome and Gail’s gazebo, Keith. I hope she got it back from the tree. I love, love, love the frog and the umbrella. Well done. 😀 — Suzanne

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 09:48

      Thanks and thanks again! That’s so kind of you Suzanne.

  18. bearmkwa's avatar bearmkwa August 15, 2019 / 14:22

    Oh, I’m cackling at the scene… and yes, I can see this as a hilarious cartoon strip! I’d cut it out of the paper and hang it on the fridge… just for the laughter!

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 09:47

      Complements don’t come better than that! Thanks so much.

  19. larry trasciatti's avatar larry trasciatti August 15, 2019 / 14:46

    so nice. It reminds me of me horrbily windy neighborhood. With Gail’s gazebo and Norman the Gnome, are you and Dale taking alliteration classes or what?

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 09:46

      Haha! Thanks for taking the time to read and remark!

  20. draliman's avatar draliman August 15, 2019 / 15:59

    Oh Gail. Caught out by a gale.
    A wise decision, waiting for the wind to die down.

  21. plaridel's avatar plaridel August 15, 2019 / 16:51

    gail is actually rosie, isn’t she? 🙂

  22. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan August 15, 2019 / 19:28

    Nothing like a disaster to seal friendship = well up to a point.

  23. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)'s avatar Björn Rudberg (brudberg) August 15, 2019 / 20:02

    Maybe Gail should spell her name Gale… funny story… and maybe after a while even Gail will laugh.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 09:39

      I did consider that! She’ll never be allowed to forget it!

  24. Nobbinmaug's avatar Nobbinmaug August 16, 2019 / 01:09

    I have been the victim of many of the wind’s cruel pranks but never anything that bad. It doesn’t sound like much fun.

  25. Tessa's avatar Tessa August 16, 2019 / 03:09

    I can see the Fire Brigade trying to take down the gazebo LOL!

  26. Sandra's avatar Sandra August 16, 2019 / 10:26

    I’m sure the fire service have had worse requests for assistance than this. Kudos to their patience and dedication.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 16, 2019 / 12:37

      I’m sure they have! I wrote a story a while back about when my friend Rosey trapped her hand in a letter box slot and requested their services!

  27. 4963andypop's avatar 4963andypop August 16, 2019 / 17:04

    That’s some windstorm there.i too was reminded of Oz. Pay attention ifyou find any striped stockings under the gazebo! Te flying monkey will be next!

  28. granonine's avatar granonine August 16, 2019 / 19:16

    Wonderful story, Keith. So funny to imagine the gazebo, the chase, the tree 🙂 Well done!

  29. Mike's avatar Mike August 16, 2019 / 20:10

    I have seen a few tent flying away, usually ending up in the sea. Good old English weather, just like today 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 17, 2019 / 13:46

      As a seasoned UK camper I’ve seen a few take off – including mine! Thanks Mike.

  30. Liz Young's avatar Liz Young August 17, 2019 / 12:17

    Watching the weather forecast before erecting such structures whould be included in the instructions.

  31. Russell's avatar Russell August 17, 2019 / 20:45

    Fun read Keith!

  32. Laurie Bell's avatar Laurie Bell August 18, 2019 / 11:53

    Yes I would wait for the wind to die down too

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings August 18, 2019 / 15:58

      No use trying to tell Gail that! Gail by name Gale by nature! Cheers Laurie

  33. Nan Falkner's avatar Nan Falkner August 18, 2019 / 23:18

    Well, it doesn’t make sense to pull it out of the tree if the storm is still blowing – Golly Gee, It’s dangerous out there! Great stormy story!

  34. Dawn M. Miller's avatar Dawn M. Miller August 19, 2019 / 15:01

    Yes….def wait till the wind dies down. lol

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