Hallowmass Eve

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It was late October in the year of our Lord 1789. In the waning hours of Hallowmass Eve, urchins in rags, and sufferers from calamity marched through the cobbled streets of Bartonwick. Smoke curled into the sky from the crooked chimneys of the thatched stone cottages. Banging on doors, the soulers begged for food and money, offering songs and prayers in payment.

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Old Harriet Wicklesmith opened her creaking oak door, and a smile spread across her wrinkled face. All day she had mixed, stirred and baked her Soul Cakes. She proffered a platter laden with steaming cross-topped sweetmeats. One by one, the soulers helped themselves. 

‘May your souls be freed from Purgatory when these cakes are eaten’, she muttered.

‘We shall eat the fruit of your labour. Blessings and prosperity will be yours’, they replied.

She returned to the calmness of her room and settled before the crackling log fire, content in the knowledge that her good deed was done and her soul comforted for another year.

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If you’d like to hear the Soul Cake song, it’s HERE!

Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?

Image Credit; Alex Shuper @ Unsplash

27 thoughts on “Hallowmass Eve

  1. Maria Michaela's avatar Maria Michaela October 21, 2024 / 11:35

    Ooohhhh nicely done, Keith. I wonder what happens if I were to try a soul cake? 🤔😁

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 21, 2024 / 15:44

      You’d be forever blessed I’m sure! Thanks, Maria.

  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje October 21, 2024 / 12:05

    A very interesting poem Keith. The soul cakes for the poor – making the occasion a blessing for them. Thanks for joining in.

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje October 21, 2024 / 17:14

        You’re most welcome 🙏🏼

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 21, 2024 / 16:29

      What more could I have hoped for? Thanks, Nancy.

  3. ben Alexander's avatar ben Alexander October 21, 2024 / 13:25

    *applause!* ~ you are so good, Keith, seriously. I love how this prompt took you back into the past 🙂

    ~David

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 21, 2024 / 16:39

      Thanks so much for your kind words – and the applause, David!

  4. beth's avatar beth October 21, 2024 / 14:34

    oooh – well done, Keith

  5. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell October 21, 2024 / 15:29

    I’d not heard of soul cakes before. Right from the first paragraph you created a wonderful image of old times past. Great work. Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings October 21, 2024 / 16:55

      I used to sell them at my pub during our annual Halloween fun-night! Simple to bake, delcious to eat!

      Thank you so much, Mason.

  6. Mason Bushell's avatar Mason Bushell October 21, 2024 / 18:44

    Your friends at the pub were very lucky. I looked at recipes online. I’m definitely having a baking session next week.

  7. Misky's avatar Misky October 21, 2024 / 21:32

    That’s lovely.

  8. byngnigel's avatar byngnigel October 22, 2024 / 10:39

    fantastic repsonse to the prompt, Keith. Love where this prompt took you. Well done, mate. 👏👏

  9. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall October 22, 2024 / 11:23

    Wow, Keith… wonderful!

  10. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin October 22, 2024 / 11:38

    Superb writing, Keith. Well told story… loved your intro…it read like the opening of A Tale of Two Cities…to me anyways.

  11. crazy4yarn2's avatar crazy4yarn2 October 23, 2024 / 22:46

    This is absolutely delightful!

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