Two worlds

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Wrapped in my warmest coat, a woolly scarf around my neck, I wished my colleagues farewell and headed off into the wrath of a winter’s night.

The freezing wind assaulted me, and a shower of hail struck my cheeks like a thousand icy needles. A car’s headlights blinded me as a frustrated driver honked his horn. My heart missed a beat. Noise, hail, light, dazzling light. If I wasn’t awake, it would be a nightmare.

Two more corners and the bridge would be in sight. As I crossed the river, the street light beside my cottage would glow like a beacon, drawing me home.  A few steps more, then I’d be safe. Safe from the hostile world that surrounded me.

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The door closed behind me, and for a moment or two I stood in the hallway, my eyes closed. It was warm. It smelt lovely. It was quiet. It was good.

As I sank into my chair, a log hissed and crackled in the hearth, and the flames that embraced it sent an orange glow around the room. My shadow flickered upon the wall like a faithful best friend. Drawing my legs up beneath me, I hugged my favourite cushion.

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Two worlds. One beyond the curtains, chilling, harsh and forbidding. One within, welcoming, snug and cosseting.

The End

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Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?

Image credit: Johannes Bek @ Pexals

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18 thoughts on “Two worlds”

  1. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬'s avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ November 2, 2026 / 13:42

    Ooh, this is nice and cozy ☺️

  2. parikhit's avatar parikhit November 2, 2026 / 13:42

    How I love the description Keith! I could feel the warmth of the hearth, witness the treacherous drive and embrace the comfort that waited at home. 🙂

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 2, 2026 / 14:42

      I’m pleased it had the desired effect, thanks so much.

  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin November 2, 2026 / 13:43

    I LOVE what you saw in this image and beautifully expressed. Love the crackling fire animated image. Perfect!

  4. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall November 2, 2026 / 14:01

    What a lovely little story. Nice one, Keith!

  5. Denise Hammond's avatar Denise Hammond November 2, 2026 / 14:01

    Lovely. I experience the same thing when I walk 80 feet to my mailbox in the winter, and then walk 80 feet back.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings November 2, 2026 / 15:13

      Thanks, Denise. You think you have a problem, have to walk 90 feet!

  6. pensitivity101's avatar pensitivity101 November 2, 2026 / 15:12

    Lovely Keith. The coziness is welcoming.

  7. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta November 2, 2026 / 16:53

    Keith that ending did indeed feel like a big warm hug 🤗 ♥️

  8. imnobodywhoareyou's avatar imnobodywhoareyou November 2, 2026 / 18:18

    Great contrast between ice and fire.

  9. Dale's avatar Dale November 2, 2026 / 20:30

    I felt this one, Keith. Especially knowing it’s in the not-too-distant future. (Not today, though! It is a balmy 19C!)

  10. beth's avatar beth November 3, 2026 / 02:54

    ah, the comforts of home

  11. Sadje's avatar Sadje November 3, 2026 / 13:40

    Excellent take Keith. Two worlds separated by a wall. Thanks for joining in.

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