A twosome!

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I shouldn’t have done it, I know, but I followed her down the hallway. She wanted me to, of course she did. I was unable to resist when she peered over her shoulder, beckoning me with her smouldering eyes.

She stopped and slowly turned. A primal urge rose within my beating heart. I was about to do something I vowed to never do again. But the shame I had felt the last time simply evaporated along with all sense and reason. Just one kiss, I told myself. That’s all. But it was not to be all. So now I have another guilty secret to lock away. It will never happen again.

Will it?

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The pictures also reminded me of something I wrote eleven years ago. I hope you don’t mind me adding it!

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I heard a voice, a sad voice
Help me, it said
Then from the gloom
a girl appeared.

What do you want? I asked
Follow and you’ll see, she said
I said I didn’t want to
Please, she begged

Then off she ran

She looked over her shoulder
A streak of light
Revealed her tear-stained face

I can’t keep up, I said
You must, she said
I’m losing you, I said

Then she disappeared

Where are you? I called
It’s too late, she cried
What did you want? I asked
Too…late, she sobbed

I guess I’ll never know

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Thanks to Sadje for hosting What Do You See?

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17 thoughts on “A twosome!”

  1. Dale's avatar Dale September 28, 2026 / 14:00

    Oh! Both leave us with bated breath! Nicely done, sir.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 28, 2026 / 17:00

      Thanks, Dale, I hope you’ve recovered by now!

      • Dale's avatar Dale September 28, 2026 / 17:04

        Yes, I am, thanks 😉

  2. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬'s avatar Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ September 28, 2026 / 14:29

    Perfectly written open-ended stories. Now I’m dying of curiosity. Bravo! 👏🏼

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 28, 2026 / 17:23

      Even I am! Thanks so much for your kind words, Nancy.

  3. Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin September 28, 2026 / 15:09

    Both are well penned and mysterious, Keith. Love the direction the prompt took you.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 28, 2026 / 17:24

      Thank you, Suzette, sometimes you see a picture and a story just appears from nowhere!

      • Suzette Benjamin's avatar Suzette Benjamin September 28, 2026 / 17:27

        I know what you mean, Keith!

  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje September 28, 2026 / 15:35

    The story is a bit scary, but the primal urges of human beings are sometimes out of control.
    The poem is so poignant and touching. Beautiful. Thanks for joining in Keith.

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 29, 2026 / 12:48

      Very true, Sadje. Thank you for your kind words..

      • Sadje's avatar Sadje September 29, 2026 / 13:02

        You’re welcome ☺️

  5. beth's avatar beth September 28, 2026 / 15:56

    Wow, those are both so intense and suspenseful

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 29, 2026 / 12:55

      Thanks, Beth. Not my normal style, so I’m pleased they had the desired effect!

  6. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall September 28, 2026 / 16:00

    Two great ones, but what?? Do tell…

    • Keith's Ramblings's avatar Keith's Ramblings September 29, 2026 / 13:04

      I don’t have the faintest idea! Cheers Chris.

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