I was at a loose end today, so I thought I’d get Suno to set an old poem of mine to music! Here’s what happened.
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She sits and stares
unfocused eyes swimming to the horizon
Gazing into infinity
No sign of tears
Her expressionless face an empty canvas
A sea of pallor
I look into her eyes
I see nothing but a swirling mist of grey
That sparkle gone
I try to ask her why
a cloud of despair envelopes her
She hears me not
But I will wait
I’ll stay by her side for as long as it takes
for her to return
But for now
She inhabits a sorrowful place of her own
Somewhere
I know not where
Are there no limits to your creativity! This was a delight.
Thanks so much Jodi. Poetry’s not really my thing, so I’m pleased you liked it!
Well done Keith. Beautiful imagery of the ocean as eyes… brilliant.
Loved this Keith.
Stunning creation, dear Keith.
This is so beautiful, Keith, both the words and the music! 💖
Beautifully done!
awww, and the waiting…
Wow. Just fab!